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Read MoreBury meBeneath Currents of Glass Underneath the overpass On your way out of town So you can take one last glance Then forget your past And don’t look back You left me here Beneath currents of glass...
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Fantastic!
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Hi Adagio
Thank you!
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Powerfully penned, Adel. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, this one has layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey Damien:)
Thank you. I wanted to try something different when I first wrote.
From the victim perspective. Giving her a voice.
I’m glad you enjoyed:)
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Truly engaging… tight lines… smooth rhyming
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Thank you!
Wanted to try something different and from a victim perspective.
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There’s two of you!? What!
No way, you’re as original as they come sweetheart!
I’ve always enjoyed reading your material, obviously. It was what reeled me in to begin with. This write of yours shows your diversity in themes and mood too. Not too dark, but plenty of shadowy imagery to compel the reader to peek.
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Hey babe,
Sometimes you write something and wonder if you should post. This was one of those writes. I posted it on
DUP a long time ago and heard about the whole Houston thing. It reminded me of this write so I put it back out in the writing universe. lol. Thanks for being my rock honey. You are priceless! -
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Well I identify as a rock, but we both know that I’m a stick. LOL
Smooch!
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The old caste system of have and have-nots. It will never change.
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Agreed Lady. Hahaha, greed, get it? Thank you
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Read MoreI, I am nothing but a thingCan you tell me how to get something out of nothingCause here I stand nothing but a thingCreated of nothing, existing for nothing I oozed from the womb Psych darkened and bent, force into...
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Man, this is a lot of truth. The chemicals we ingest or put in our bodies that cause cancer. This is a very heavy hitter. Nicely done
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Thank you Lady, much appreciation
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This covered just about everything and how much control we really have.
Over our bodies and what we ingest. Lots of information out there now.
This reaffirms do your homework.
Well said amigo!-
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Yes lots of stuff happening now just keep your head up
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Read MoreLove Sonnet I Your words were not of the moon, or the fire of a Rose song full of blood and wine, or of the shadows in the melody; yet, in this yellow moment, when flowers climb through my window, and their fragrance is of you after...
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Awesome. I love love Pablo. He was a big influence on how I developed as a writer.
Your “tribute” here is very well done. Top tier. He’d definitely give you a smile and a nod of acknowledgement, as do I.-
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Thanks for the truly wonderful comment and compliment, Styxian. Pablo was indeed a Grand Poet! I think his poetry flowed from his deep love of the people, their struggles, their love, and their place in the world. He truly was a poet of the people.
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I saw a “Sonnet”, and I immediately click in, though I don’t know how to write them or other forms of poetry, but for me sonnets always held the mysterious allure. It seems You are like me blending love, poetry and nature, and I love this, your first Sonnet feels like a door to an ongoing story… sweet and passionate, may I ask what kind of Sonnet is this? I’m unfamiliar with this form.
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Hi Light. I am not sure how you would define or label a sonnet like this. Pablo Neruda wrote his sonnets in this free style form. It still held to the 14 lines but had a different internal rhythm than the traditional Shakespearean Sonnets. The last 3 lines usually are the heart or twist for the poem. A google search reveals this explanation for his sonnets:
“Pablo Neruda’s sonnet style is characterized by its evocative language, rich imagery, and complex poetic techniques. His sonnets often explore the theme of unending love, using metaphors and sensory details to create an intimate connection between the reader and the poet. Neruda’s sonnets are divided into four sections, each representing a different part of the day, and he uses the sonnet form to convey his message about the timeless relevance and universal appeal of love. His work has been translated into English numerous times, and it continues to resonate with readers around the world.”
Thank you Light for reading, comment and visit.
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Thank You for your response❤️ I am only fimmliar with the classical form of Sonnets, to write Sonnets with Free Style seems my way 😄
Good Coffee Morning ☕
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Sinisterly penned, Brenda. A powerful dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian