Oh wow she went up in flames and covered you in ash. This is so good. I like how you started off with the roar of the engines. Like you want to rev up the intensity about to play out here.

Well we saw her through a friend over at DUP, she was a true inspiration. Thanks Lady

One word. Apocalyptic!
Like Tina Turner in Mad Max beyond the thunder dome.
Great storytelling with a cool vibe.

We try still wondering what happened with your reservation piece. LiLi was an actual goddess we don’t remember Aztec or Mayan we just decided to play with her with a poetess. Thanks

It’s not a bad skill set to have, we personally know quite a few females that ride. Thank you for reading and commenting Lady

This is a peaceful piece with a tempting picture

Beautiful work.

Thank you Fia and Thomas for reading.
It was a quiet morning on the back deck.

Some people sit back and enjoy the scenery
Others want to memorize it and spread the word.
Thanks for sharing!

Classic…..made me giggle.

I thought you loved me….brilliant

Okay first stanza is the shocker.
Then you twisted it in the last stanza.
Mouth open all through this read. Then I laughed.

I enjoyed this surprising tale. That darn Agnes!

She’s appeared in two previous pieces. She’s the church bookkeeper who is stealing to fund her casino addiction.

Saint Nick might have a fondness for other pastors wives….he’s human after all.
🙏

I read this backward. I read the second piece before this. Now it makes sense. lol No Sparks,,yeah right

This had me moving. The riff is good, and the music went well with it.

Powerfully penned, Drieks. You’re an incredible lyricist my friend. Your arrangements always fit your words tightly. Excellent work.. Appreciate you.

Damian

Oh Lordy! You’ve done it again.
It’s like you know what melody/hook to use depending on the tone of the lyrics.
Where to emphasize your message. I listened to this when you posted but didn’t know how to reply.
I was at a loss of words! That is rare! Hahaha
Much respect chica!
Keep killing it!

Thank you! ❤️

You’re a beast at this thing Lady, to freaking Tight

This i awesome. I somehow talked Fia into getting a Spoken Word group going (actually, I kind of bamboozled her into it). HER wants to join and she suggested we get Willow and you as well. After listening to this, I feel really out of my league. I’m a lifelong entertainer, but mostly in theater. When I started writing for performance, I had no music, just me, so that’s what I’ve been doing. But you would bring some real class to the group, and if we do this right, we can build something outstanding for all of us. Interested?

Hey, what happened to the audio? I sent a link to this page to a friend and he told me no song was here, so I came back — and it’s gone! Please put it back.