Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Tremendous work. Gripping.

Hauntingly penned, Tim. Logic over valor my friend. Excellent write you’re a great storyteller. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is good and had me laughing with the pedal to the metal.

Tim, this took me into the haunted rooms of that house and feeling the disquieted vibes as I read. Truly a master work of short story telling. Your descriptions of the broken window and dusty curtains made the scene come alive for me in full visual effect. As the story unfolded I enjoyed the narration and how it pulled me into the story. Truly great ghost story telling that had me fascinated unto that great ending where the message appears on his phone.

John

We can only hope in a good way, Thank You Lady

We prefer this style of writing to any other, we like the chill of the darkness. Thank You Lady

We hope that means you liked the piece, Thanks Lady

Expecting the unexpected doesn’t always work, Thanks Lady

This gives me zombie. A sexual ravenous zombie at that.