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Read Moregentle understanding, in your depths I searchto find a way to reconcilethe wild ways of the world and your nature Fatherinside me is conflicting feelingscreative need, you admonish me you prefer my softer sidecruel desire is the way of...
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hello lovely Fia he told me last night after I posted my poem he said he knows I am capable of this mischief but he prefers my softer side…I asked him further about his varied sides and he says it’s all in what side I provoke will I get from him thank you for reading and commenting ❤️
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Crimsin, both tender and fiery this poem is. He tries to elicit your soft side but his true nature brings out the lioness. Great poem as I have come to expect from you.
John
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brilliant work. Powerful.
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Brenda, you amaze me with, “of others playing on different courts.” Love that line.
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A lovely & fragile piece of poetry Brenda. You always seem to amaze. Great work here.
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Read MoreStress encircled her eyes. When any hope was hopelessand light-years away,she opened her dresser drawer. Beneath lengthypharmacy referralsand exponential credit card billsthe black metal trigger resembledthe color of a raven. At the speed of lightand with enough energyto cross the expanse of...
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No, hope, could not find a way out of everything.
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Sadly no. Thanks for the comment, Fia.
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It is sad but you ended it with a bang. I love that you used the word stardust!
Even though she was tortured, you made her sparkle at the end.
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Nice observation Adelly. Thank you for the comment. 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Not every write has a happily ever after. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m glad you liked it. Thanks Damian. 🙂
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Tim, this was softly explosive. Like a dream that comes true in a dark and sad way. Exquisitely written my friend.
John
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Read More5.33 amback deckcup of teabirds callingno windfruit bats returning home8 billion human beingsso very few experience these moments it really is just dumb luck no God involved.***************************Quote from Stan Gramt in this mornings paper:As a society, as a species, we are...
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There is no future in the past. Only lessons. Nice one
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Thanks for your thoughtful comment.
The only real problem with AI is, that it makes the truth almost impossible to discern.Seeing used to be believing but not anymore.No doubt, the powerful and the wicked will use AI for any other reason than to create poetry etc.💋💋💋💋
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Read MoreAh, the smell as I entered the house, I could smell everything neededThere was someone living here that thought Death could be cheatedAs I carefully closed the kitchen door behind meI grabbed a knife from the counter and then...
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Hahaha, kids right. We heard someone say once, you’re to young to know what love is, be careful of those words. Thanks Lady
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Love is a motherfucka that can twist the mind.
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Exactly dude
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Read MoreAs the guillotine's blade slid into the flesh of her neckShe recited a spell while giving birth for the executioner to inspectThe same blade was used also to cut the umbillical cordThe executioner saw the sixes on the baby's...
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This is playing out like something I can see on television. This is good ME
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That is quite the compliment, thank you Lady
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We asked you before do you enter of your on free will? It was in relation to a piece at the time, a little darkness never hurts. Thanks Lady
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You already know I fuck with shit like this. Keep it flowing.
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Thanks a ton dude, much appreciation
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It is very bewitching. When he tells you to stay calm so his monster does not come out. nice