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Read MoreOn this vehicle with no one behind the steering wheelI am afraid of the windinvisible in nature and yet always present, loomingAnd chewing on its edible paper cutsI grew feathers in my armsAnd I stare back at it with...
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Thank you, Damian. Appreciate it.
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Thank you Damian! “)
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The pleasure is all mine, Fia! Thank you! “)
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Thank you M.E :)) <3
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Read MoreOnce Upon a Midnight sky A rendezvous between you and I A secret plan that was never to be told Was let out and all the others now know I wear his mark that he had given me Your eyes show there is no...
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A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)
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Thank you, M.E I love Poe.;))
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a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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There was a wicked man
who had a wicked cock…But I’m a wicked girl
who wants to rock your world-
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You already do.xoxo
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Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶
With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.
Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.
“Once Upon a Midnight sky
A rendezvous between you and I”Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌-
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Thank you, and it is a pleasure to have you interpret my writing. I am still a student to poetry and I am learning from all of you. Thank you, Rascal
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You make sharing poetry a sparkling joy, Fia ✨
We’re all students, who can always improve and never learn it all.
You’re well on your way to mastery … keep faithful to your passionate goals and dedicated to listening with an open eye and willing mind.If you should ever seek a tutor! ⁓ Richard 👍
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Read MoreIt's been locked away for so longYou're asking me to allow you the keyTo push open the door that's so strongLetting you see what can never beDo you hear the thud, thud, thudDo you know what it could beDo...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Read MoreWhy do angles cry? On angelic faces, Leaving tracks behind. Leaving traces, On a wound, That cannot heal. From lashes of words, Made from steel. Why do the tears fall from grace? Upon this fragile place. Weeping and Wallowing From this ache. Why does it feel like I am losing control? This never-ending...
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Sometimes emotion comes out as a savage storm that cannot be contained.
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Yes, it does. Thank you, Casket Sharpe
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian I appreciate that.
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Thank you, Adira, it means a lot to me
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Read MoreThey say, share the love, But what if I don't know you that well yet? How can I love you? I want to get to know you. I look at your words, and I think maybe I can share my love Some of you are...
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Chère F.,
I guess that you just cannot know
For me this is how it’s supposed to be
Your soft words really hit hard
They resonate deeply with meI love it to bits!
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Thank you, Gus, I appreciate your kind words.
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If you can’t hate anyone then you almost certainly love everyone.
Do I love you from a distance? Of course I do.
It would get trickier if there wete no distance and lust and love melt into each other.
Great write Fia….
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Thank you, Peter. Yes let’s give love away.
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Tickle me strawberry. It’s fantastic!
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Thank you, Adagio appreciate that;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Fantastic write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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<#3
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Thank you, Cipher;))
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A single sock has never been sadder.
Maybe it’s under the bed?
I fully agree with this poem overall.
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Thank you, Jim ;))
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or stuck in the dryer
or taken away from the clothesline by a raven
or used for a change purse by the homeless gal who just passed by
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Omg, change purse?
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she’s poor and has no change, but holds out hope nonetheless
‘never walk by money’ her Dad used to say
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Cleverly penned, Fia & M.E. Love the back and forth of the write my friends. Appreciate you both.
Damian