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Read MoreWhy am I drawn to your writing? I'm not sure myself. Is it because I can see the damage and every word Or is it that I can see you See, you get so engulfed in every word To make your point come across? It's...
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Thank you, Damian <3
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Sizzling piece Fia. Well written and scorching hot. xo
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Thank you, Vision, Keeping it warm here. lol
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amazingly penned, a tantalizing, fiery read. that’s sensually engaging.
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Thank you so much Chantepleure appreciate that.
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Like this sexiness Lady, we agree that a great piece of writing can stir the loins. Tight work
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Thank you Me, love stirring the loins
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
This feels raw and self-aware, especially in how it explores the act of reading as intimacy. There’s a lot of honesty here.
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Thank you, I tend to fall into the poems I read
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This is some sexy voyeurism you got going on here, Fia
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Thank you Naaj. It’s funny what the mind will conjure up as you read.
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Read MoreAt Stars Rite, we want to make it clear that no member is removed from the site without due process. We believe in fairness, transparency, and maintaining a safe and respectful writing community. Below is an outline of our...
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Thanks for the information, Fia. Is that spam right above my comment? Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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It was
I got rid of it.
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Great info. Thanks Fia.
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Thank you Vision
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Good to know:).
Thanks for being transparent and letting us know what the process is.
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Read MoreMy skin hurts. It feels like they're ripping it off my bones—sliver by sliver. I can't scream anymore. My voice left me an hour after they started. They said that once it's done, I'll be a changed person. Yeah,...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling my friend. This is really good. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Sexy & well written. Nice work Fia.
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Thank you Vision 😊
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Powerful work. You bring this to vivid life.
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Harriet-Jacqui xx and
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Here is Guillotine bi-trillets
The ring of steel bells. beckons us to hell
The audience ignores the sound
Multiple bodies hit the groundThe chiming goes on, sings a restless song
Unrelenting sorrowful tears
The heart shutters to stop in fearHope is so far gone, whispered please at dawn
Guillotine swinging in the sun
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Gobsmacking good, Fia!
When you can take a form like this one you’ve never even seen before, observe a few easy details – then, with an earnest effort, turn it into such a creatively captivating poetic tale, makingi it seem effortless – now, that’s something to be proud of, because not everyone possesses this level of potential and/or natural…Read More
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Thank you
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You’re ever-so welcome, Fia
My apology: I forgot an edit; V2-L3, (shuttering should be shuddering).
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It’s okay. That took me three tries. Lol
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YEAH, ya killed it!
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Passionately penned, Fia. Damn, the room got hot. This one is fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian