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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe Audio and Media files are being worked on. It is not a simple fix and will take time. Sorry for the inconvenience.
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I like the rhyming scheme and the poem.
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I appreciate the read and the comment, Fia. I am happy you enjoyed both!
Thank you for stopping by.
Clay
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great flow and subject matter very beautiful ❤️
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Thank you, my friend! It was a gorgeous day and place that inspired it.
I appreciate you taking the time.
Clay
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Hello, Her. You nailed it, my child-self was indeed a’visiting. It brings me true joy to know this poem was helpful for you!
You may borrow my rose-tinted glasses anytime.
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Carefree, peaceful, a joyous, tranquil vibe. Nice work.
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Thank you, Visions_of_Insanity, you captured this poem’s spirit perfectly. I keep wishing I could return to that afternoon!
I appreciate the visit
Clay
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Read MoreIt’s cold in this time of the year And it reminds me of your hands There were no hands But there was some warmth Maybe from this thread of conversations Days of Q’s and A’s Days of exchanging stories, And some thoughts On how hearts can be...
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Captivating .. and most original .. I was hooked and played fairly and squarely from one end to the very other .. Indeed, I am glad I felt compelled to check in & stop by .. All Good Things and write on brother M.E .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, Neville! I appreciate it “)
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It’s pieces like this gives food for thought, they seem to relate and then they don’t. Tight work dude
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Thank you! “)
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I do enjoy the back-and-forth of a conversation. The last line made me say, “Aww.”
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Thank you, Fia! Highly appreciated. “)
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Well written M.E The story was compelling and lovely in it’s delivery. Great job
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Thank you my friend! I appreciate it “)
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Cleverly penned, ME. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you brother! I appreciate you! “)
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I like that! Indeed it was both best and worst times. Thank you so much! “)
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This is much different than mainstream and I like it. Well written.
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This feels like intimacy remembered through frost — awkward, tender, human as hell.
The beauty is in the fractures: jokes, longing, missed timing, love that never quite learned how to land.
Quietly devastating, and honest enough to sting.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreThis is your quick Sunday News We have started a new Forum called Collaboration. If you want to join and see if someone would like to collaborate with you that is the place to go. (Please try not to directly...
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It’s good to to be able to keep up with site developments, thanks again Fia .. Neville 😎👍
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Great info Fia. Thanks!
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Thanks, Fia. You keep us all well informed my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Very cool
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian