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Read MoreThe first time I brought the Oud to the school I was ridiculed by many of my friends. However when several other students began to be assigned their own musical instruments then the ridicule stopped. Only a few of...
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Read MoreWake up in the morning,with one goal in mind.How to feed my babies,without committing a crime. Everyone sees,But can not imagine.How easy it could be.How can this life happen? Never wanted a picket fence,or a house with a yard.All I could...
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Thank you so much Damian;))
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We do what we must. Well, the good ones do! Like you.
Speak your words, Fia. Take a bow and some praise. It ain’t easy out there. Luckily you’ve discovered the therapy of ceative writing. It DOES help. It can save souls, if we trust ourselves to focus on hope.
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Thank you, Styxian;)) We must focus on hope.
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Man. I can relate to this. Not just myself but with my friends and family.
There is no telling where I’d be without my mom. She is my rock.
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Thank you, Adel. It’s hard but worth it;))
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The kids are everything. And if they’re not…something ain’t right. Felt this one in my maternal DNA.
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Thank you, Willow. They are everything.;))
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Whatever it takes!
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Thank you, Paula. you are right.
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Life can be cruel and unfair, so I thank God for mothers like this. It is my great hope that their sacrifices will be rewarded–if not in this life, then the next.
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Thank you, Sam. That is sweet;))
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Life is a fight. You have invoked a great feeling of grit and determination.
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Thank you, I needed to hear that today.;))
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I felt this deep in my marrow. Your dedication to those children renewed my faith in humankind. The struggle to keep your children fed and housed moved my heart deeply. This is truly one of your very best poems. It speaks to me of a mother’s love and her oh so protective spirit t keep her children safe, healthy, and well. This is much more than a poem it is a living breathing testament to a mother’s love. I loved this so much.
John
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Thank you, you think it’s one of my best.. appreciate that.
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Incredible write my friend, really like this a lot. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊
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It’s a beautiful thing when minds sync on one purpose. Your closing line couldn’t define it better!
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Thank you, Kelly;))
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Sweetly sung as whispers. A hint of seductive word play without being graphic. I like the subtlety. Leave the reader to build their own visions as they read. Well crafted Fia.
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Thank you, you know I can be “in your face” with the graphics. But I can tone it down as well.;))
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Thank you, Hj xx
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Nicely done, Fia. Your romantic side is showing. 🙂
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(giggling) I can be romantic. Thank you, Tim;))
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🙂 I’ll bet you can.
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I am keeping all this romance together.;))
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Superb and sensual. Excellent.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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Nicely done, Fia, but it seems to need just a bit of punctuation to help with the flow, I wasn’t sure at first how to read it, stopping after each line, then going, “Oh, I see it now.” Nice work.
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Thank you, FlatDaddy;))
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You can beat an egg and a drum and a carpet .. and a few other things besides .. but you just can’t beat a bit of sync now can ya eh’ .. Very much enjoyed the ride Fia .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Hold on we have to go back to the beginning, we will return on your tightness
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Thank you, Me;))
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Fia, this read like an erotic encounter of a bewitchingly soft yet libidinal ambrosia. There is magic here that takes me into the heart of the poem. I could feel the silken sheets and that last line has to be the most original and brilliant ending “liquid ambrosia”.
John
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I wanted it be soft. Thank you
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Read MoreYou take me to a dream of nonsensical promisesOf rainbows and diamonds falling from the skyA kiss placed strategically on the browScreams of hidden thoughts and wants Why should we not indulge in a dreamAllow liberties and fanciful playOnce awakened...
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This is whimsical with beautiful wording throughout, Fia. Really nice work. 🙂
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Thank you, Tim;)) <3
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I felt instantly swept into a pure, sensuous dream. Every line is brimming with color, desire, and such a playful, intoxicating energy. It’s more than a cocktail; it’s a feast for the senses.
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Thank you, Romaj…It’s a feast for the senses…appreciate that;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I love the playful nature of this write my friend. Excellent! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Nice work Fia. You’re a wonderful poet!
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Thank you so much, Vision
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, I felt the sting of your words. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian