Really good. I like the sassiness of her saying This ain’t Appalachia and you ain’t Paul Bunyan.lol

Well this is musing. lol
liked the people like privacy they get intrusion part really good

thoroughly enjoyed Damian .. & then some .. Neville

Hellish visions. Intense feeling.
Regards
James

A bit towards the apocalypse in its foretelling, yeah? I also get a “War Pigs” vibe as well (Black Sabbath).
Excellent rhyme scheme as well. Great write Damian.

Wow, one more of your excellent, intense and thought provoking right things, dear Damien! Especially the last verse speaks to me a lot. World most people consider God as all seeing eye that is watching and judging us, all sing that UI energy is just experiencing itself, manifested and the form of a human being. So it is entirely up to us what to do with our lives. Personally, I think it is best to listen to our heart and to our intuition. Why won’t lead us a stray.

That is so true time is a trap it does not go back

congrats Thomas on your book

Well designed write about a situation that we all can relate to. The anguish is well described here. We feel it.
Well done, Thomas.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Another excellent write with incredible storytelling my friend. Congrats, on the book. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

Damian