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Read MoreWhen they beganThey held handsThey smiledThey illuminated the sky Chairs were heldGiggles slipped freelyAnd the thought ofWhat base is a good one for this date Time goes byRings were boughtVows were saidIn laws glare rivaling Spoke on star trek at Dr....
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Thank you Angel Louise;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. Dig the Star Trek reference by the way. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you cuz. I am a Star Trek fan lol:))
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“Would you ever want the loop to end?“
That’s a great, almost philosophical question. Some people like to escape a loop because they only see the endless repetition of the same actions. To me it holds the chance to experience new aspects of old routines on the basis of familiar facts. It’s adventurous and reliable at the same time.
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Thank you Sappho;))
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I recently had a co worker/friend who lost her husband. He was a young guy too. I read this feeling like you could have wrote this for them, and my heart breaks all over. Thank you for this sad beautiful read.
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Thank you Brandon;))
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Powerful and poignant. Great write.
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Thank you Thomas;))
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Wow a lot of times if the love and bond is that strong it would be hard to live without them.
I know a friend who recently past a few months after because he couldn’t live without his beloved wife.Powerful great write
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That does happen. If the bond is that strong. thank you Lizz:))
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Finding a soul mate is hard enough in a lifetime but then losing them?
Yes, that ending line does beg the question many people would agree to.
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Thank you, Wally;))
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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
Insidious
I’m willing to sacrifice myself
to prove the truth
of my words
of meare you willing to do the same?
lies…
in time…
will be uncovered
and everyone will seethe scuttling
ear to ear
insidiously whispering
it will be seenI have never changed
eventually they’ll know
and perhaps remember
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I think that perhaps the question might be, do they have a conscious to listen to?? Often the conscious is suppressed by the ego of self, and thinking that self is the be all and end all of everything. Hell, it’s even written into the Constitution… ‘the pursuit of happiness’. My happiness versus your happiness. What an “insidious” way to live!!…Read More
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The idea that one person’s “right or wrong” should apply to all is absolute arrogance. And the thought that disagreement on concept or friend choice should be cause for attack is insane. Differences are what we’re made of, it’s what makes us beautiful as a human ra e, and it’s our greatest strength…if we embrace them with love. To turn on others…Read More
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Read MoreI'm willing to sacrifice myself to prove the truth of my words of me are you willing to do the same? lies... in time... will be uncovered and everyone will see the scuttling ear to ear insidiously whispering it will be seen I have never changed eventually they'll know and perhaps remember but it will...
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Willow I was a target of gossip. A lie was told and the person who started it turn beet red when I confronted her with the person who she accused me of talking about. This poem is a slammer.
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I try my best to not engage in that sort of interactions. If someone says something negative about someone else, I immediately wonder what they’re saying about me when I’m not there. I don’t know what they gain by it. Once the truth comes out, they look even worse. But they never seem to figure that out until it’s too late. Thank you, Fia
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The person who whispered lies about me was a bully. Thought they’d always get their way because the mask they wore for everyone else was so attractive. That’s pretty much what I see when I look at the current completely corrupt regime. You know they’re lying because their lips are moving. But the fanatics still follow their premier bully like the blind sycophants they are. When the blinders fall, it’s gonna get ugly. We might just need a bigger bonfire, my friend
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It’s how you sort the real from the face front friends, unfortunately. I lost a lot of people I thought knew me for me because they listened to lies. In the end, I didn’t need that kind of support. It wasn’t real. I learned a lot from the experience though. Thank you, Elke
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Retrospect-ivision is the perfect view. Seems like there’s always going to be somebody who has to test the boundaries and write a new reality, one that favors them. That’s our world these days.
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D. Ignatov is with Randall and 85 others
Friends, I want to share with you that I have channels on Odysee https://odysee.com/@ignatov:c
and Rutube https://rutube.ru/channel/31410769/videos/ , where I post audio versions of my stories, book trailers, and music tracks based on the plots. The content is in Russian, but if you’re learning Russian or just interested, welcome!P.S.
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Beautiful illustration, Dmitry! You surely know how to make them!
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Thanks! ^_^
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Nice work, keep up the good work.
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Thank you!
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Your rutube fantasy page looks impressive – well done you! I couldn’t find you on the other site, though.
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THX!
Do you mean “Odysee”? Every character in the link is important…
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Yes, Odysee.
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This is awesome D. I’ll look into it.
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Thanks! ^_^
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Really sounds interesting we promise to give it a look
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Thank you ^_^
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Sam Nash wrote a new post
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Read MoreYou lied to me.You told me you were my friend.I believed you were godsendA lover, not hell bendOn destroying me. You tricked me.You told me we would be together. I believed we would be foreverA couple, not the devilBent on killing...
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Hey Sam.
Loved the structure of this. The poem is great but there was movement too.
I love those kind of writes.
I like how you transitioned to questions towards the end.Spectacularly done amigo!
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Powerfully penned, Sam. Excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I enjoyed this one. Without a doubt, if holding hands is how it ends…I would not change a thing.