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  • @Detritus
  • July 17, 2026

I read this as finding the strength to quell fear despite endless inward and outward struggle. With the sun at our backs we may better keep our shadows from running amuck. Fantastic piece! Clay

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  • July 17, 2026

Whoever the antagonist is would be wise to keep an eye on the peripheral shadows, lest the hunter become the hunted, as they say. The judgement of others is indeed a vice we are better without, and still, we know it will forever be part of human life. Excellent...

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  • July 17, 2026

This intriguing story kept my attention all the way to the end. I always attempt to place myself in the main characters shoes, and from that perspective I did indeed feel the discomfort you hoped to portray. Hunter’s repetitive habits set the stage perfectly and gives the reader an...

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Awen Found View Comment
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  • July 17, 2026

Thank you, Damian.

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Awen Found View Comment
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  • July 17, 2026

Thank you, Crimsin.

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