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Living in the Night View Comment
  • @Detritus
  • July 21, 2026

Short and sweet like the night is during the summertime. I imagine some bodacious and ethereal shoegaze playing in the background. Nice one! Clay

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An Honest Song View Comment
  • @Detritus
  • July 18, 2026

An honest song indeed, Damian. Once again you have touched and mastered the hard truths being ignored all around us. I am imagining some beautiful ivory tickling, with this magnificent write. Cheers, my friend Clay

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sunset View Comment
  • @Detritus
  • July 17, 2026

I read this as finding the strength to quell fear despite endless inward and outward struggle. With the sun at our backs we may better keep our shadows from running amuck. Fantastic piece! Clay

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vice and virtue View Comment
  • @Detritus
  • July 17, 2026

Whoever the antagonist is would be wise to keep an eye on the peripheral shadows, lest the hunter become the hunted, as they say. The judgement of others is indeed a vice we are better without, and still, we know it will forever be part of human life. Excellent...

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Broken Reflection View Comment
  • @Detritus
  • July 17, 2026

This intriguing story kept my attention all the way to the end. I always attempt to place myself in the main characters shoes, and from that perspective I did indeed feel the discomfort you hoped to portray. Hunter’s repetitive habits set the stage perfectly and gives the reader an...

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