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    Rearview Epiphany (collab with M.E)

    On this vehicle with no one behind the steering wheelI am afraid of the windinvisible in nature and yet always present, loomingAnd chewing on its edible paper cutsI grew feathers in my armsAnd I stare back at it with...

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    war

    assasin of faith quiet your gunslong out of need war has begunseething design a future of naughtexplain yourself in the brightnessof exploding nuculear energyweapons of mass destructionman devolves time hiccupsdestiny halts takes a deep breathand proceedes forwardsorrow invades where...

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    • crimsin this is good and true. You can feel this, like a ripple effect in the human psyche.

      • thank you beautiful Fia we are in this together and I really feel their pain on my body I think many of us do 💕

    • An eyeopening poem to the horrors and effects of wars. Well written!

      • hi dearest Me good afternoon we carry the weight of it all of us whether we realize it or not thank you for the love on this 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Into the book it belongs! So true my friend, you nailed the vibe. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you graciously dearest Damian I don’t usually like to write about this but it’s on my mind and it occurred to me we carry the weight of it on our bodies I appreciate you 💕

    • Yes, my friend. I feel it too.

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    The Wicked Man

    Once Upon a Midnight sky  A rendezvous between you and I    A secret plan that was never to be told Was let out and all the others now know    I wear his mark that he had given me Your eyes show there is no...

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    • A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)

    • a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • There was a wicked man
      who had a wicked cock…

      But I’m a wicked girl
      who wants to rock your world

    • Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶

      With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.

      Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.

      “Once Upon a Midnight sky
      A rendezvous between you and I”

      Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
      you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      • Thank you, and it is a pleasure to have you interpret my writing. I am still a student to poetry and I am learning from all of you. Thank you, Rascal

        • You make sharing poetry a sparkling joy, Fia ✨

          We’re all students, who can always improve and never learn it all.
          You’re well on your way to mastery … keep faithful to your passionate goals and dedicated to listening with an open eye and willing mind.

          If you should ever seek a tutor! ⁓ Richard 👍

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    Dream Lovers

    https://youtu.be/kPa7bsKwL-c?si=OqKCK1km251Wjmu6Music link- Bruno Mars and Lady Gaga. Die with a smile. Please copy and paste while reading, ty❤️ I don’t know his nameHe doesn’t know mine.We met twice in my dreams.The first time,we ran into each otherby happenstanceand we kissed,It...

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    • This is summer sweetness. I like how they left and met again. Lovely
      The picture is so cute.

      • Hi Fia, long time no say sweet lady❤️
        It was incredible. It felt so surreal and this happened this morning at 4:30 AM. I woke up and I felt like it really happened. The Kisses were passionate. He was beautiful, kind, caring and even though I don’t know him, I could tell he was the kind of man that everyone loves.
        Thanks for looking, miss you❤️
        Jackie xo

    • this is just a dream?.. mmm

      • Hi Sam, nice to see you here 🙂
        Yeah, it is just a dream, but wow it felt so real. I mean it really felt real and when he told me he loved me. I already knew that.
        I believe this was a parallel dream. I believe I do know him in that realm and he knows me. I don’t know his name, he doesn’t know mine, but maybe the next time we meet in my dreams we will know. Or maybe names don’t matter.
        Thanks for looking Sam and leaving your comment.
        Jackie xo

    • What you so pleasantly say in this poem happens to me once in awhile, (not too often sadly).
      I love it and this.

      • I mean it was one of those dreams where you’re half awake but you’re still dreaming and you just continue to finish the dream but I woke up abruptly and I wanted to go back to sleep to finish the dream but I’m taking a new medication and I had a bad reaction. And so, in the moment I wrote about. what I experienced in the dream. Hey for all I know it could be a parallel universe experience and I do know him person, and knows me, and we have met before . Thanks for looking. I appreciate you. Thanks for the comment Jim.
        Jackie 🙂

        • Yeah, that happens too. Sometime I feel a loss when I wake up. The dream usually goes unfulfilled. 🙁
          I get over it tho.
          yw

    • Sweet write and dream! From reading your replies I get that its a real dream. Have you looked up its interpretation?
      Most of my dreams are incomprehensible and weird but I like making poems out of them. “)

      • My dreams are vivid and a lot of the time they make no sense. But not this time. It was awesome!
        Thanks for the visit M.E
        Jackie 🙂

    • Beautifully penned, Jackie. A lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • How wonderful to keep seeing you visit my page. I appreciate you too Damian very much🤟🙂
        Jackie xoxo

    • Glad to be seen Ms Z.
      Did you check out my latest from a few day ago?
      Maybe you’ll like it.
      Jim 😘

    • This is filled with the magic of love between strangers that transcends all. Bursting with passion and glowing with love. This is a true beauty of poetic inspiration my friend.

      John

      • It felt like I knew him and he knew me. It was so surreal. Thanks for looking John. I’ll be by to check out what you’ve been writing. Love you.
        Jackie ❤️

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    Inkless

    It seems so often, within the night,I am set adrift, unable to write,for a want of any reliable ink,as I converge upon the brink. While thoughts and feelings swirl,my life passing by in a whirl,so yesterday becomes my tomorrow,stuck on...

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