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Read MoreThe bed thumps rhythmically beneath you while youmake a grocery listand notice the weirdwater stain by the edge of the ceiling fanthe pace increases soyou stifle a half-assed moan and tilt your pelvis and wonderis thisis this…and you wait...
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Thanks Damian, I appreciate you right back.
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Oh-Wow! I absolutely loved this, Betty. Best wishes, Harriet-Jacqui Furl, published erotica author
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Thank you HJ. Back atcha!
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Betty love your writes. Wooo
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Thank you my sweet friend.
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Your pieces are always so stimulating Lady, to tight
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Hey ME!
It is tight as hell, my friend! (Kegals doncha know.)
Thanks my friend. Good to see you.
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What! Betty graces us with some creative writing here! Or, also known as Lillith has entered Eden! What!
“forearm against your pelvis” = Details are everything, and this is exquisitely precise to make it a real moment. That bit of control is boss!
Well you had mentioned that you were going to concentrate on erotica. So that explains this humdinger of a write!
The way you make it so realistic, without any overly porn promotion, shows your skill, ahem, at creative writing.
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My sweet, innocent brother-from-another-mother.
No, this was just some older stuff dusted off.
I have yet to write the porn.
It’s gonna be like a Gallagher show, you’ll need visqueen sheeting to avoid the splash zone.
JUST KIDDING…
MaybeHey, bro, thanks. I fucking adore you. Your critique matters and I really appreciate you for it. Thank you for being a fucking icon.
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Icon? Don’t be calling me no foreign little car made by Hundai !! I’m tall dammit!
Okay okay.
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Gotta love the raw honesty spilling onto the page without restraint. “Are those your toes curling in the sheets?” it’s that damn good.
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LOL, thanks Wally. I appreciate you!
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Read MoreBitternessYour life in bitternessHatredHate consumes your every emotionYour soul is engulfed with blacknessPutting your guilt upon othersHate takes over your lifeHate takes over your mindYou feel your life slip awayWhen you live your life in hateYou seal your destinyYou've...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This was an excellent fucking write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed this piece Damian.
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Hate hollows the spirit until nothing remains but the echo of its own ruin.
Only love, when remembered, can unseal what the heart has already buried.-
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Your words always shine PAR. Thank you for this feedback.
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This reads like a moral reckoning set to a slow, steady drumbeat.
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Appreciate the feedback Thomas. Thank you!
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Read MoreAs odd as it may seemThis reality is only a dreamLike millions of insects freezing to deathSociopathic is my mathematicsThe final answer is zeroC'mon, you'd love to be the superhero The processed foods of your laborsHave decayed into diseaseAnd the...
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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Ahh the processed food we consumed is decayed in desease…why was I eating when I read this. Good one. Good visuals
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Stay away from processed foods. They will debilitate you and eventually kill you! Thanks Fia!
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Read MoreIf you could disappear, I'd be a happy manWhat does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time Take a huge bite of my psychotic addictionCome a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchenConsequences...
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Oh man the enemy is within. Only you can break yourself down. Good spill
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Appreciate that Fia. Thank you!!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent exorcism my friend. Seriously, in this instance that’s what I’d call this amazing write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Some of my pieces I feel I’m possessed. When the writing session is over, I go back to my laid back, humble ways. Thanks man.
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Love it when you’re SO dark, Mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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Hello HJ. I thank you for the generous comments here. The darkness comes out every so often. Happy that you enjoyed this.
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian