Love this… great job Damion…

This post, at first blush, leaves me with what to disagree with. After a second read, and seeing the layers underneath, it is powerful and insists that one consider it on the deeper level. Many thanks and blessings. <3 Echo

Fist in the air, I’m over here going “Yeah! And…yeah!” All the way through this one. I remember this one & I’m glad she followed you over. Some truths should never fade into darkness. Favorite line:

Only way to quit the lie is to go cold turkey

That is gold, my friend

Raw and gritty. Love it.

Totally agree…
We got a shitstorm of rhetoric and meaningless ambiguity to wade through. I remember the term “Double Speak” from Orwell’s 1984. So legitimate. The dude had the future pegged.

What we need round here is another Nostradamus and some hymnals.

Great write

Love your raw writing man ❤️‍🔥

Phenomenal piece Damian. Nice work.

Wow. Just wow.
So, did you want to fuck that woman in the restaurant or not?

Certain things in life men and woman will never understand about one another. I feel your pain but I don’t understand it.
Glad you enjoyed it. xox

Cool. Let’s make it happen!

Now you’ve done it. I’m scared to fucking death. I want an ovary transplant when I start to get hot flashes

LOL. Never heard of such a thing. Hormone supplements are the therapy of choice. It’s amazing how many girls I know get testosterone pellets. Apparently, it boosts libido massively. Yes, I said testosterone. Women have that too.

ahh… great to be reading you yet again my dear adored versatile prolific poet n my deep friend, loveable ev Keith:)

& yep this is a short sweet power packed write of yours.. that inching in nearness… that magnetic zing in that pulling in space.. that electrifying gentle touch n the massaging wetness of an aromatic shampooing act… aw you leave me absolutely wordless n stunned in this immense masterpiece so concise .. sensual n ah that stretch of peaking imagination that follows all .. is undeniably pure ecstasy.. whatev impure shade it may be filled in;)

n yes, you are there! that final closure of a topsy turvy twist keith-wise;)

to be honest, all along my maze of mind was wandering wondering over the laters & metaphors of this all, hidden or explicit;)

great take dear One xo

my first SR read here & yes this is epic:)

light love ev

uma

Great title

Pleasure journey

BIG LIKE

Love this piece Damian. Well written my friend.

I read the title, the summary &…my jaw still dropped when I started reading the actual poem! Ya turnin’ up the heat in here, my friend!

Side note, when I started my hand at erotica, I was so self-conscious that I created an alternate account on DUP to hide behind while I worked out how & what my erotic voice sounds like. I remember you saying you always worry it sounds corny…absolutely nothing corny about your erotica, my friend! 🔥

I like this style of erotica.

damn. excellent write.

Oh, you’re a boy with a beat, Damian. I can feel it. Music all over it.
“All the worries give way to pleasure” – got the Marvin Gay “Sexual Healing” going on.
You can be my ‘Repeat Offender’ any time.

xoxo

This was from an inspiration. Very well done and had all the right elements. Love it. ;))