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Sappho (Elke) wrote a new post
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Read MoreDay in, day out the same routine Rolling a stone up a hill, steep and tall Condemned to watch its fateful fall No light at the tunnel's end to be seen Keep it rolling, it's your job Keep it rolling, up to the top You...
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Thank you very much, dear Peter!
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Well done, my friend.
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Thank you for the recognition, dear Abbey!
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Excellent piece Elke. Always a pleasure to read your poetry.
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And it’s always a pleasure to read your kind comments, dear Keith. Thousands of thanks!
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Brilliantly penned, Elke. Excellent write my friend, it has a lyrical vibe to it. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’re kind comments always succeed in making me blush. Loads of thanks, dear Damian!
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What a wonderful thing to read today. The routines of work life do indeed wear us down. Although I tend to daydream much of the day away. I usually have very busy days at work. But, I try to take little breaks to maintain my decent mood the best I can. Your write here is a great testament to how to deal with that.
Awesome result, Elke.-
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, dear Styx! You are absolutely right, breaks are equally important as work. And daydreaming is by far more than an escape from reality. It can be a real fountain of creativity and inspiration . When you don’t wreck your brain was tasks and problems, you are mine is open to receive new ideas. This way, serendipity helped the most brilliant ideas to manifest in reality. Go on like this, it’s a great attitude!
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I have to apologize for the typing errors.
One sentence should read : when you don’t rack your brain… You are open to receive new ideas
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You capture the grind and the small awakenings with quiet grit—the stone never stops, but neither does the heart.
The contrast between monotony and fleeting beauty lands like a soft punch; it lingers in the chest.-
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Thank you very much for your kind comment, Thomas! I’m glad that my poem spoke to you.
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“Keep it rolling, do your duty
Yet be aware of life’s beauty” Priceless!! Well done, Elke! “)
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Read MoreHer feet scorchesthe Earth,with every blistering step. Resentment within herselffor all those long nights she wept. Hating herself for losing control of things;In her mind on a loop— “They will pay.All they do is,Lie,steal,fuck,and scheme.” But now...now,she is a walking revelation. Her heart,...
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Well damn this is intense and written with passion. The ending gave it softness and tenderness. loved it
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Thank you, sweet Fia. xx
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This is incredible, my friend. Written with emotions, that could light a match…smoking a cigarette.
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Handle the flame with care, my dear friend. xx
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Chère PG.,
Hope this finds you well?!What a gentle ending you’ve made of this.
And what a lovely piece of work!
Kind regards, Gus-
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Gus, it is always a pleasure..thank you for your kind words.
I hope all is well! xx
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Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. I always dig the layers in your work, fantastic storytelling, tied together with the conclusion of being in a better state of being by the end. Nicely done per usual, I’m a fan. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Those who get it, just get it. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words my friend.
xx
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Thank god he came … or we would all have been fucked … nicely done
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Sam thank you for reading! And yeah, or maybe it would have been enjoyable .. I guess we will never know now 😉 xx
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Read MoreThe house is still silent.My first thought is the last thing you said, and it haunts me all night. I know I’ll wake up aching for release, thinking about comforting your cock with my liquid aching. Everything yearns for...
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Crisp imagery as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate you too, DD. I mean, I do love me some me, so the passion is authentic.
🙂
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You’re waiting for the story to end. Oh my, this story is hot, it should not end.
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I mean, a girl can only lay in bed rubbing one out so long before she has to go be part of the world…. but thank you Fia!
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It sizzles with a touch of noir in one’s skivvies! I like it, Betty.
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Thanks my friend. Glad you liked it!
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Most erotica is as sexy as cold vomit, cliche and only appreciated by the sleaze pigs. You have this remarkable ability to reach inside the male mind and to deconstruct feral desires. It’s not something which usually moves me, but between my ankles and hips, your words always leave a tattoo. Great scribbling Boo.
You may not remember the fake Satanic Slut fake profile on DU? It was actually a gay male friend of mine. So outlandish and utterly bizarre, it was blatantly obvious a fake. And yet his inbox was awash with dribbling males. There’s another similar. Is there a moral to that? Probably just be aware of sad little men.
Rob x
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You damn me with false praise, dear Rob.
More please?
I feel like men don’t really stand a chance against me, sad or real or otherwise. You know?
Thank you my friend. I fucking love and appreciate you.
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Well, seems like you had a rough morning. Not!
As Ghosteen said, most adult poetry/prose is simply amateur porn. It takes an actual thought process to make it appealing. We use our brains too, when we have sex of any kind. So when someone can step it up to being something relatable, achievable even, for us all, then that means its good writing. So bravo to ya, for making it real for the reader. -
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Thank you my brother. The brain is the biggest sex organ, and I love that you pointed that out.
Thank you for the commentary. I absolutely adore you, and your opinion always matters.
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Oh my. Oh my my my! Well hello Betty!
This was quite the experience to read! That sweet spot of a dream and feeling completely immersed.
Having those fantasies or dreams gets the heart going amiga. This takes vivid cardio exercise to another level.
I felt the frustration of the alarm. Noooooo!And I love that bright smile of yours- after reading this I see why! Hahaha. No one does this better than you!
I’m so happy to see ya posted:)
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Hey lovely one! Thank you for the kind words.
Yeah, fuck the alarm, like, why does it always go off right… then?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!It’s good to be posting. I’m not sure where I’m going. Maybe longer erotica in the future. For now just reposting the few prose erotic pieces I had from in the day. Thank you for being here supporting my pervert brain! LOVE YOU GIRL!
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Oh those 9 minutes of the snooze button…
So I almost read this while at work but upon reading the title, I opted to come back at a later time and I’m glad I did (I can’t risk people walking up behind me while read this kind of work, clutching my pearls).
Amazing. It’s every man’s fantasy and daydream, the peak of sexuality and longing wrapped up in such a hot scenario.
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Wally, that would have been a disaster! I’m glad you avoided the pearl clutching my friend.
You know I’m pro run for everything. So run your ASS off! Glad to have helped with your cardio, sweet friend.
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Read MorePiss & Shit in your mouthSnow cone beef treats made at my house Mouth pie cream vanilla wafers wait for my tongue Ice cream fribble on my nippleSoda flavored onion pickles I like to hold change in my belly button Holy guacamoliaBatman flavored...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Do you have a food fetish? lol. Don’t answer I don’t wanna know that bad. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love food and I love sex. Put them together and you may have something there my friend. But this was taken from the outer reaches of my mind. Thanks!
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Good that I have already eaten breakfast. Your creativity doesn’t know any bounds, and this is great. Well done, my friend!
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Hello Elke. I thank you for the comments, always!!
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This one’s wild, unhinged, and gleefully grotesque—like a carnival mirror reflecting chaos.
It’s shocking, sure, but it wears its own madness proudly; your voice doesn’t flinch, and neither should the reader.-
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Thanks Thomas. Let’s eat!
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Love this.
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