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Read MoreThey ask me what I do all daynow I've left the working life,"Oh nothing much," I always sayand spare them all the strife. But today I rose and breakfasted,and stripped the bed down bare,put three loads of washing onand hung...
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Finally im someones Hero…..glad you enjoyed it Gus
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I know when I retire, I will still be busy. Nothing is never nothing, right.
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreLove’s always been a tricky concept for me to articulate. The moment it depends on reasons, it stops being love and turns into an exchange,something that lasts only as long as the reasons do.Ask your partner why they love...
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Interesting observation my friend with some solid points as well. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Now that is a thought to ponder on. If they shrug it is unconditional love. very interesting
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Read MoreShe came up behind me as I was taking off my makeup, and wrapped her arms around my waist. “Vienes a la cama, Amor?” Are you coming to bed, love? I smiled and closed my eyes. She didn’t initiate often, but fuck. Just...
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Based on this artiusing piece, I think in my next life I’d like to be a woman.
Great write.
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Thanks Peter, it’s the fucking best.
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent storytelling per usual really love the layers in your writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. It’s so much harder for me to write this narrative voice, and I appreciate that you foind nuance.
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Stinking, reeking, sweating womanly sex – so hot my knees are trembling!
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Mine were too. WLW smells like gardenias and jasmine… fucking glorious shit.
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Gardenias and Jasmine! Aren’t you the lucky one, girl?! Cherish the moment! Harriet-Jacqui Furl writing as HJ Furl on Amazon.
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Why, why did this have to end? lol I know life continues but this is hot.
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I mean, we had to work. 🙂
When it was one of THOSE nights with the one who got away, it feels like it never ends… god above… it feels like eternity in every steaming breath. Smooth skin and soft breasts and held-breath cries… yeah. It feels forever.
Thanks for dropping in Fia and supporting me. I don’t know what I’m doing right now, but I’m appreciative to have space to stretch my fingers and figure it out.
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You are welcome to do that here. Betty
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What the hell?! You literally described Del. And in another subliminal way that I noticed, because I’m kinda like rain man sometimes. LOL. So what if I’m quirky!
BTW, if I was a female, I’d be lesbian. I get it.
Your erotica is intense and not pornish. That is because you are a skilled writer!
I’m still waiting for more of your heady writes. But I know you’re on a purge. So have at it. Thankfully you’re good at all subject matter.-
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Bro, when I said I’d fucking take your woman from you if you were an asshole? I MEANT it. I’d totally steal your woman from you. (She’s hot!)
Thanks. The intimacy is so, so different, and structuring it in a way that was less textbook and more opera is still challenging. I might write for my gay half for a while. (My straight half has had the shit kicked out of it for some years.)
I don’t know what’s next as Betty. I don’t know if she has much left in the way of heady writing. We shall see.
Love you bro. I mean, really. (Be good to your girl or else!)
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She is incredible. So I’m not an asshole just for her! LOL.
“Betty” needs to celebrate being Betty across a few topics, etc. You have a very human way with words that everyone can relate to, and wish that they themselves had the inner voice to get down in words. So embrace it all. You are very well rounded.
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Really love the go between you and Styxian, great commenting. The piece can’t be denied for it’s steaminess, it’s like watching a flick, tight
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Styx is seriously my brother-from-another-mother. Glad you dug it my friend. Really glad.
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Read MoreTwo trees grow closely, side by side Through storms of strife and turning tide Drenched by rains of grief and gall Sun-warmed by bliss that touches all In love and strength, they stand so tall Two trees, yet forest all in all Two birds within...
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Beautiful, my friend.
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Thank you very much, dear Atticus! 🙏🏼
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Elke…. your soul is reflected in this poem…both are beautiful.
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Thank you, dear Peter, for this awesome comment! 😊
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Beautifully penned, Elke. This is an amazing write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My deepest gratitude for your uplifting comment and your appreciation, dear Damian!
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Chère S.,
Ahhhhh, you did it again!
Painting with Words!
And I love the artwork too.
Prompt writing?
Anyway, I forget the reasoning so I can immerse myself in this warm bath.
Herßliche, viel herßliche, Gus-
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Loads of thanks for your wonderful kind comments, dear Gus! 🙏🏼
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Wonderful. You never let us down, as readers. This one is a great example of your fluid rhymes, with a powerful message carried consistently throughout it. Awesome, Elke.
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Thank you so much for your kindness and your appreciative comment dear Styx! You made me smile delightfully! ☺️
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Talking to trees, and listening to their replies, to their wisdom, is one way to understanding how all life is connected, intertwined, in a fundamental way. It is how we become more humane and how we find love. I think your poem is a testament to this, Elke.
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Yes indeed, all of life is deeply interconnected. All living beings are deeply dependent on one another. Whatever happens to one species has affects on the whole planet. E.g trees have a well functioning communications system.They warn each other of danger; if it serves the well-being of the entire forest, they even help their competitors.
thank you very much for your meaningful comment dear Curt! 🌲😊
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Read More“He knew he had fucked up for not being faithfulBut he caught her at home horny and emotional, “At first she asked for him to leave her doorwayBefore she knew it they were...
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You had us thinking with this one dude. We was thinking maybe a monster with the kick out but leaving the door open but there is some real life here. Tight
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It is happening as we speak, because many women want admit being addicted to what the dick did.
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You left me addicted! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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Well your are always welcome to cum for more.
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mmmn!
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Hi B.,
Hope this finds you well?!
What a stellar write!
I’ll be back tomorrow to have another laugh or two.
I stopped working some 15 years ago. Not retired exactly but more like enough = enough.
I wish I had your write at that time!
You’re my hero!
Kind regards, Gus