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Read MoreBonnie Blue ain't so Bonnie.Bodies on sale in a camera glare,men grow quietejaculate and swear.When lust is counted,not felt true,love retreats,and hearts undo.Brenda: “I don’t think the problem is sex itself. It’s what Bonnie Blue’s story becomes, a spectacle....
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![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
I wasn’t sure if I were taking liberties by using yours and others names.
In the end I think they mostly would agree with my views on the Bonnie Blue thing.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This is a good conversation to have. The double standard and how society views it. Like the use of the writers on here. I think you capture their voice well.
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Brilliant work
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It’s a fascinating doco on Bonnie.
I’d like to see the uncut version.
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This is an absolutely powerful writing, dear Peter! Your idea to bring several Starsrite member for a meaningful discussion on the Round Table is brilliant! Thanks a lot for including me!
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I included you because I like your depth.🙏
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Sometimes the quickly captured thoughts make for better poetry……this one has.
Being human isn’t easy 💋-
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Thank you, and no it sure isn’t
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I’ve found that all emotions serve a purpose…we just can’t serve them. This is a brilliant piece. Fear and anger can be all consuming when given free rein
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Most definitely. Ive always been a swee and kind person. But I dont like bei6pushed or my kndn3ss taken for weakness and used. I know i have another side to me ive just never had to use her. Im almost at the point of opening the door completely.
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hello lovely Sapphire I understand this well I have a demon too that I am constantly biting my tongue it’s so hard great write ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, SW. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend. I can definitely relate, amazing poem. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It’s always a reward to me to see you’ve posted something.
This is a strong write, surrounded by the songish rhymes. As if singing it under your breath as you venture into a struggle.
It’s better than you think.
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Thank you all for your kind words. I’m writing again this time mostly about strength and not wanting to wake my inner beast but its being tested. We’ll see what idea people deathly want to see
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Read MoreThe barbarians andcannibals are loose onthe streets, looking forinnocent hearts to eat.The silly and simple sitblindly, while we watchtheir demise withbrutal and vivid vision.Get off the train tothe animal factory,and go right, to theverdant pastures ofrighteousness andpeace.
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I want so badly to get off the current train. Brilliant, Thomas
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Thank you, Willow
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Outstanding write my friend. Beyond furious with that damn train. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, my friend
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Love it! Great work and some marvelous detail in such a short poem.
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Thanks
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This is a dark and cutting vision of now.
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Thank you.
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Superb work. Powerful.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Now this one I can see a bit of the dark side. There’s a deeply relatable element to this that transcends subject or time. Depending on the point of being, it fits multiple topics. We write from a perspective and when it’s shared, it develops unexpected layers. I would like to have seen it performed during your 15 minutes of fame. It must have had a tremendous draw to it, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I was in a very dark place when I penned this one, I was going through something heavy, and it came out in the words. The one thing I truly love about what we do as writers, is the multiple meanings the reader or listener can take away from our words. We as the writer know what we’re really talking about or going through when we create. The reader doesn’t have those blinders on, they are in fact another point of view, without the writers biases. It is a great little song. It got a response from the crowd. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This makes me feel your pain. The growl had to be wicked on this song.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I was in pain when I penned this, so the words are ripe with it. The growl makes its point known. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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hugs dearest Damian I am person who doesn’t know how to stop loving… I feel this write very deeply beautiful soul ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I don’t know how to stop myself. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Your words transform pain into art, dear Damian! I feel your heart and soul dripping from your pen. Intense and beautiful!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s so kind of you to say, what a lovely comment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful piece of poetry Damian. Dark and intense! Great work here.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I could be dark and intense sometimes for sure. This was a pretty painful time I was going through, life has a way of fucking with you sometimes! lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI wonder, after all these years,If she still considers herself luckyTo have landed a fishOf such colour and tenacity.Or,Does she now only seeFaded beautySans scales, sans colour, sans vitalityYet still attached to her hook?I ask myself the same questions...
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend this one has layers. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Cool idea, thanks for the honorable mention my friend. A group of writers with critical thinking skills having a rational conversation. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian