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Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
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This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!
Daniel
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Brenda, your comment makes me want to ask you to write a piece yourself with the same title! I’m curious and I’m sure I would love what you would create!
Daniel
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it’s funny I wrote a poem called breathe after you and before I saw yours we are on the same wavelength 😊
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Your writing goes under my skin. Intense as if it was really written with heart blood. Perfectly written, Daniel!
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