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thank you graciously dearest Thomas just things I think about 💕
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreUnder the slumping shoulders of the cafe's awningI watched tiny rain circles loosely burst in puddleson the ground whilemy hair lightly waved fromSeptember's weary winds.Nat King Cole sang softly"A Blossom Fell,"on small hanging speakers when she strolled byquickly catching...
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beautifully written I felt this 💕
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Thank you, Crimsin
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Best revenge, live happily ever happy without them holding a place inside you. Easy to say, I know. Yet, writing it out is also great therapy and makes you breathe better. Our success comes from trial and error. You succeed regardless.
Write it out amigo.-
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Thanks very much for your comment, Styx.
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much, Damian.
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I note you still have it .. exquisitely poemed good sir .. Regards to both you n ya pen .. Neville
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I appreciate that, Neville, thanks. 🙂
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Read MoreGuttering flames of her red dress blazed into the hours after midnight, where she danced on the furthest table She could have been the train window girl who peeled me from the platform placed her ticket in the pocket astride my heart, our destination was...
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Read MoreDay And Night in the Hot South A strange scent, like vanilla transports us to an exotic land where birds of paradise warble and the whippoorwill sings a lonely song. In the muscadine wine dusk, we two souls sit...
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You’re such an excellent writer, John. There are so many rich lines that flow in this and I love the culture that emanates from it. In my mind I can hear “South City Midnight Lady,” from the Doobie Brothers.
Great story!
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Deep gratitude Tim. I very much appreciate your thoughts on this tale of mine. Really made my night. Love that you appreciated the culture emanating here. The scenes are the real place of my boyhood. Love that this reminded you of that song. Thank you so much.
John
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Superb work. Great imagery.