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Read MoreIn the grip of winterImpending dreadThe opposing army seized their homeFought them hard and with honorCritical madness All of his family slaughteredDisemboweledStillborn removedTorchedCharred remains He was the last survivorBarely endured the massacreRidden with diseaseSevered survivalGasping for airOn life support A vacant coffin...
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Thanks Fia. Appreciate it.
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No one every really wins at war. It is just useless devastation and loss of lives.
This is an impressive portrait showing that.
And no one really survives. Even the survivors suffer so much mental and emotional loss.
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Absolutely. The only winners are the governments of the world. Thanks Jacob.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. The casualties of war extend farther than those who gave their life, others are scarred physically and mentally for the rest of their existence. With Governments that discard them, after they’ve been broken by war. Sad but true my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
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No one comes out unharmed. It’s a shame we here about so much of it time & time again. No matter what part of the world or decade, war rears it’s ugly head. Thanks my friend.
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Tremendous work. RiGHT ON MAN.
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Thank you Thomas for the awesome feedback!
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Read MoreAssassination of Love bullets split sides pristine blame magic disappears the doves peace is a wounded hope its life's blood shedding red splotched feathers a molting desire to come together seems to have flown away a dead wish. erin-cilberto 9/13/25
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The bullets killed the innocents of love represented by you, using the doves. Like this
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Thank you for your kind comment, Fia. And thank you for the welcome to the site. I am still
trying to negotiate.
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Thank you for your kind comment, Fia.
And thank you for the welcome to the site.
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You are welcome Jacob
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Wow, I felt this. Very powerful write.