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Read Moremy sadness sufferswept understanding my tears formyour shadow loomsstoic resolve you don't need meoccult need I'm a groupie in your shadesorrow gleans information from your silencejilted passion longs for your touchbut I'm pretty when I cryyou covet my longingdesire...
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously yes she did I really love her 💕
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someone once told me I was pretty when I cry and then I heard the song and thought of Marilyn thank you Mary 💕
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it’s okay no worries Mary…it was a long time ago…💕
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Read MoreWith my blood kissed steel... On your knees you will kneel... If you should deny my grace... Never again you'll see my face...
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Phenomenally penned, SW. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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D,
Thank you, I’m hoping to study the more mideval style of writing.
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Vintage Crimsin, at her best. Love it.
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thank you dearest Adagio most graciously 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you most graciously for such a kind comment 💕
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Hoi hoi
If a poet can be tender, can a poem be tender to?
A declaration of love.
And the four last sentenses the cherry on the cake.
Love it a lot!
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hello dearest Gus good evening I do believe a poem can be tender thank you for your lovely thoughts on this 💕
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thank you graciously lovely Mary 💕
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good evening beautiful poetess thank you graciously 💕
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It is so very human. Gia protect your vulnerability.
Be well-
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hello Jim thank you for a thoughtful and caring comment 💕
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Hi Crimsin. You are very welcomed.
I love your pen name too.
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thank you Jim I chose it a long time ago… I should have had it trademarked but oh well 💕
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Is it too late? 🙂
If I ever see another using it, I’ll threaten a law suit. be well
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Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
“secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
“your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)Just an amazing piece of work, girl.
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hello beautiful Meg good afternoon thank you graciously for such a great review 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good afternoon dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕
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Amazing piece Crimsin!
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hello good afternoon dearest poet thank you graciously 💕
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You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!
Naaj
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hi there dearest Naajir good afternoon thank you graciously for a lovely response 💕
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Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you for such a beautiful comment 💕
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No apologies necessary, girl. This is what writing is for. Your catharsis. Hand over your feelings. The piece is strong and moving.
Meg
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hello lovely Meg thank you graciously it is difficult because my feelings seem to confront me when I write there is no hiding from them… I deeply appreciate your understanding and willingness to listen my name is Brenda 💕
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hello dearest Will thank you for the good advise I want to get past this feeling in my life and in my writing…sometimes I think I here my son asking me ma, what are you doing when I am unkind to myself…still I am grateful I had time with my son to be close to him before he died… I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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Do whatever you need to do to survive…..write,cry,complain,run naked trough the streets if you have to…….just survive.
Take care and you have friends here that care even if from the other side of the earth.
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hello Peter good morning thank you for an understanding advise and a comment that made me smile 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. No apologies are needed, you grieve as long as you need to my friend. You’re working through your thoughts and emotions, writing is your therapy right now. I’m supportive because I also use my writing as therapy, I think it’s what writers do. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for being so supportive and understanding I appreciate you 💕
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I felt this.
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hello dearest Adagio thank you my friend 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Monroe, knew some secrets for sure. So many people that had ties to Kennedy got killed. Even Mafia bosses. Fantastic write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian