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      Fia speaks,and I reply.We see each other eye to eye.My body fits her like a dress.She flicks her tongue, and I confess.She takes me where I should not go.She tells me things she cannot know.She pets my muff until...

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      derailed

      the night derailed, I was feverish to cover my sinwith platitudes and lost thoughtsmy soul sinks with the realization I'm prone to diveinto my bag of despair sully what's good with liesit hurts to know I might be no gooda...

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      • Filled with the desire to live life fully unburdened by guilt and sorrow. A truly grand ode to a higher power. Very strong emotions made into an eloquent poem.

        John

        • Hello John so happy to see you here… thank you graciously for such a heartwarming comment I appreciate you ❤️

      • The first two verses were incredble hard to top.
        But you maintained your intensity.
        I often find verses scream out to me when I read peoms.

        “A defective part of some bigger machine.”

      • hello lovely poetess thank you graciously ❤️

      • hello dearest poet I deeply appreciate your thoughts thank you graciously ❤️

      • Superb work. Powerful.

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      Indiscretion

      self hatred is upon memy grip slipped and I indulgedsobriety is much harder than I thoughtmy will is to succeed so I will pick up myself and start againdaunted and shaken I realize it may be roughif I obstain...

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      • This is open and raw, Brenda. You let us in to see the true you. Nice

        • hello lovely Fia I am struggling some days it’s like being on pins and needles with anxiety all day still I will start again tomorrow and hope it gets better thank you for your understanding heart ❤️

      • thank you for reading and commenting fortunate for me this was a relapse not a new course I will face every day I can sober and I just started counseling so will see how it goes…I’m more worried about my health I take care of my appearance…❤️

      • A powerful testament to the will to live and be free of the weight that can hold you down. Strength abounds in your words. The courage to face the future unflinchingly and overcome the obstacles to your freedom.

        John

        • thank you dearest John for such encouraging thoughts just lovely I appreciate you ❤️

      • Chère B.,
        Hope this finds you well?

        What a powerful poem/story!

        To be able to stop is prove of your will power.
        To make mistakes and to be able to stop again is prove of being very human. As in very very human in all glory.

        I say: hats off (in Dutch: hat off – how many hats do you wear?) to you.
        I wish for you to keep up the strength and love from those around you.
        Please don’t give up. You are strong!
        Kind regards, Gus

        Maybe you’ll notice that English is a language my mum didn’t teach me. If I make stupid mistakes, I’m sorry

        • hello dearest gus thank you for the very thoughtful comment and as far as your English goes it’s very good…that you know more than one language wonderful… I deeply appreciate the uplifting comment ❤️

      • thank you graciously for such a beautiful comment lovely Adira ❤️

      • Killer poem Brenda. Well written and strong in delivery!

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