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Read MoreI wrote a poem then I picked up a guitar sang a couple lines holy shit that's a hit! Jimmy Iovine is now looking at me like I'm a chick with big tits because there's money to be made just not for the artist getting clicks on Spotify making...
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Thanks you. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
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Phenomenal write, Nick. A great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the compliment and read. It is very much appreciated.
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Haha!! You get it
Capitalism is a double-edged sword. Can’t avoid it
Always swing with leveragePoetic dopeness and a timely write
Much respect
Naaj
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Read MoreThey told me to hold on Becasue Pain… ENDS Eventually They told me that HOPE was my saving grace A warm blanket, I could curl up in So why does it smother? Hope, feels more like a weighted blanket too heavy to bear leaving me limp...
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Some pain is just forever. You just learn to push it deep.
Wonderful poem. I could feel your pain with each word.
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Some pain truly does just last forever.
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A heart-wrenching write! As Nick put it, we can feel the pain with each word. <3
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Someone’s I just have to let the pain have a voice and it almost always comes out a bit intense.
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Nothing is permanent so abandon all hope….it’s a trick of your mind.There is only this moment.
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your thoughts and kind words.
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Powerfully penned, Julia. Could feel the pain in your words my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate you as well! Thank you for taking the time to read and leave thoughtful words.
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Right? It’s never ending. Just one variation to the next. But yes, we learn to appreciate it all!
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You are correct, many years of experience are wrapped up in those words. Thank you for your intuitive comment.
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Powerful work.
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Read More"I would really like to help you Miss Jane but Mr Vanlian is not here," the hotel receptionist was shooing me away but I stood my ground. I wasn't going to let some minor technicality from seeing him. If...
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You need a Murad
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very nicerrrr
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yes nice
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Read MoreNo spooning no forking No cutlery in bed No sweet cunnilingus No more giving head No doggies no cowboys No lube,no more toys No sounds like " I'm cumming" Life's greatest of joys. No moisture no heat No pounding of bits No pinching or biting No cock between tits No biting...
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That is so sad. Nothing at all.
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Noooooooooo
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I suspect that there are also many women, of a certain age,whose husbands aren’t interested in sex any more….but I ain’t one of them.
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Other peoples wives….lol
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You can say anything to me….
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And you my dear are a miracle.💋
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Love the Dr. Suess format. Fun piece, despite the sadness.
My mom once shared with me that she and my dad never lost their passion for each other and were still, er. active until shortly before he died at 84. I wish all couples could be that lucky.
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Love your rhyme!!!
But JFC I pray to never be this woman!! No nothing? At all? Ever? It’s quite miserable. :’( Great poem. xx
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Praying won’t stop the process of ageing and delusting.If that’s you in the picture then you have time on your hands sand plenty of praying time ahead of you.
May the force be with you.💋
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Peter, congrats on your hardware for this piece! It’s truly excellent and you are definitely deserving! The rhyme is brilliant. The meter is spectacular. The subject matter is disturbing, but that’s what poetry is about. Despite the depressing circumstances, you still manage a subtle tongue in cheek sort of literary smirk… capped off by this reference to silverware.
Brilliant
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Thanks DK for the lengthy comment….aren’t words magnificent.If only some of our leaders could use theirs more wisely.
😘
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Ah, Peter (and I choose that address on purpose, of course), folie a deux of the wurst kind (sorry, couldn’t resist), but terrible enough to be a winner, eh, P? A nice write. had me chuckling for sure. A nice job here.
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My day has started well by bringing a chuckle to yourself.
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and we need more of both 🙂
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I love the pick. Sleezy monopoly. The poem went perfect with it