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You searched every horizon for beauty, while I stood beside you, quietly becoming invisible.
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thank you so much beautifull Fia you made my night ❤️
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously please forgive my tardy responses on the other poems your on mind and I will catch up I appreciate you deeply ❤️
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Amethyste, you said more in this short poem than many do with longer ones. This spoke to me tonight and I could feel it in my heart.
John
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Thank you dear. I appreciate it a lot.
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Read MoreShe was made beautifulsuperficially flawlessimpenetrable, perhaps.Heaven sent, yet I knewall lofty things crashfrom the weight of conscience. The gods gave her a jarpristine, ornate even thoughof human influences.She kept it close, intimately hers-Had vowed not to open itif she hoped...
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This form of poetry is so entrancing. “That some boundaries are crossed by desire.” Feel that.
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Thanks Fia. I read up on the story a couple of times, and was contemplating adding more gods names dropped in it. But nah, I decided to keep it mostly intimate between the two. The idea was to keep it symbolic, erotic, but not to cross the obvious language of the obvious. lol.
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There is so much power in this write!
Each line conjures such intense emotional pull. Like magnets colliding!
You’r waiting for an explosion 💥 that feels exquisite. You had me at the edge of my seat reading this. Hahah.
Phew, this was intense and filled with curiosity.
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not to mention the connection with the name “Pandora”… I was going to take and use a picture of one of the small jewelry boxes here on the(your) dresser. But the one I used works too I guess.
You know how long I messed with this write. I still see a little bit of edits… But I’m resting it. LOL
Hey, it’s no secret where such inspiration comes from, for me to get ideas like this! What!Pew pew!
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The splendor of your poem filled me as I read with a rapturous yet softly and darkly wonder. I could see Pandora with her jar and the first tentative attraction unfolding until that jar of opened and the tempests come. But after the storm there is a truth in her being that is irresistible and compelling in the utmost. I could feel this in my heart and it was a truly splendorous read.
John
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Much appreciated, John. That’s quite a comment! I was really torn over whether to write of the result of the opening moreso. But decided to end it the way it is. Mostly because the write became a bit too lengthy, so I felt the need to cut it like I did.
Your comment is awesome, thank you!-Mark
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Thank you very much, Bat. This one took quite a bit of work!
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Two face and the Riddler are causing havoc
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Well what a hell of a comment, Brenda. Thanks for that. I’m trying to find subjects a bit unordinary. This one was a leap!
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I am doing well, Damian. A recent trip to Texas (to see Del) was awesome.
Thank you for the supportive comment, too. This one took quite a bit of work, and hacking up the lines, for days. I’m trying to be interesting for the reader/s, so any encouraging words go a long way. Thank you.
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Read MoreRainbow Gathering The northern hills of the Kisatchie—looming!—lyrically, mind you, in a wild, howling, wind-whipped abandon, humping up out of the Louisiana flatlands like great sandstone whales breaching beneath an Arcadian sky! We are out on the edge, the...
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This is very good. Like that they broke bread together with the Boombox playing.
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Thank you so much Fia. And I did indeed like how this came out with them breaking bread together. This is based on a real life experience my wife and I had with a rainbow gathering in Kisatchie National Forest long ago. Though the hippies did make a tea house deep in the wilderness area we never found the tea place though we searched for it. But we did have wonderful encounters with the hippies that day including a young lady who was very much like the Missy in this story.
John
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This is soo good, favorite line, “with the understanding the light shines so bright only because of the darkness”