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Wally and
Ahavati (Tam) are now friends
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thank you graciously beautiful poetess I deeply appreciate your thoughts on the nuances of the poem 💕you made me smile and touched my heart…
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Deep write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment 💕
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hello lovely poetess this is very interesting great write 💕
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Hello Crimsin. Thank you for the feedback.
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I liked this.
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Thank you a lot. 🙂
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You’re very good a setting up intrigue and suspense
Naaj
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Thank you a lot dear.
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My pleasure – dear 💖
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I love reading your unique and fearless poems Ms A
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You spoil me with your words and I like it a lot. 🙂
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Good. You deserve this spoilage. It’s sweet though. 😉
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Yes it is sweet.
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Read MoreOn my last drunken escapade,I was sitting in my girlfriend'sliving room.It was 3:28 am, I was suckingon a cheap bottle of vodka, andIt was sucking the soul rightout of me.I knew things needed to change.She had just sucked me...
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hello dearest Thomas I wonder what has you sad your girlfriend or the drink and I’m curious what the bird symbolized…nice metaphoric write…💕
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Thank you Crimson. Both had me sad. Bird represents freedom and serenity.
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You know, when I drink Vodka, we’ve got dragons catching ravens. I just leave those motherfuckers alone.
Every poem tells a story, Thomas. I love it. But it does look like your girlfriend would have driven you.
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lol. Thank you. You are fantastic.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. I can definitely relate my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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Vodka is my demon drink but I just read yesterday that it’s good for your heart in moderation…
Translation: it’s always good to clean up from time to time. The drink will be there, you just have not be too.
Powerful confessional
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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Hugely complex piece and I love the pic. I like how you use color to reflect emotion. Some great alliteration in this piece and the rare use of personification as well. It highlights the inner struggle as the body continues to persevere. Deep, tantalizing, thought provoking.
xoxo