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Read MoreA teenage girl somewhere anywhere was busy text messaging friends on her cell phone a month ago.She was walking along a set of railroad tracks.Although deaf since birth, she had frequently proclaimed that she could avoid danger more easily...
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Hi Damian. I’m familiar with that old track. The Yardbirds & Aerosmith covered it. Thanks for the feedback friend.
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Gotta be on your toes. Getting too comfortable can get you hurt.
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Absolutely. People today are so oblivious of their surroundings. That was one of the reasons why I wrote this piece. Thanks Adelphina.
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Scrumptious minced blind meat…
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Come one, come all for this delectable treat. Thanks PAR.
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Read MoreWith rope in handAnd a smile on his facePreparing for the journeyTo leave this placeFrom a tree branchA knot carefully tiedWith hope and anticipationOf his impending suicideHe placed the nooseAround his own neckNothing seemed to phase himThis surreal reality...
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I often wonder about those who comit suicide,if at the point of no return,they reconsider their options.
Well written piece about a subject that needs much more open discussion.
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Thank you..and thats a great question..I think some if not most might do..maybe there’s that brief moment of reflection or introspection where you realize suicide wasnt the solution but its not reversible..its a very dynamic and complicated matter for sure..and more discussion is def needed. Its a sad and tragic part of life that many ppl(family and friends)have dealt with..a haunting experience for loved ones for sure..thank you for commenting..I appreciate it
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Perhaps in his contrition he realized a schmaltzy and powerful truth — “you live once then you’re dead forever”. I cannot recall where I read it but that line has helped me stay around for 8 years. The simple things… you know? Thank you for sharing this incredible write!
Clay
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Thank you for sharing that powerful line..its so true and straight to the point..it puts life in perspective and teaches us life is valuable..and that time is the most precious commodity and we shouldn’t take it for granted..cherish every day..I appreciate your comment and glad you liked
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Daniel Long and
Jacob erin-cilberto are now friends
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Incredible write my friend, really like this a lot. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊
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It’s a beautiful thing when minds sync on one purpose. Your closing line couldn’t define it better!
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Thank you, Kelly;))
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Sweetly sung as whispers. A hint of seductive word play without being graphic. I like the subtlety. Leave the reader to build their own visions as they read. Well crafted Fia.
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Thank you, you know I can be “in your face” with the graphics. But I can tone it down as well.;))
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Thank you, Hj xx
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Nicely done, Fia. Your romantic side is showing. 🙂
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(giggling) I can be romantic. Thank you, Tim;))
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🙂 I’ll bet you can.
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I am keeping all this romance together.;))
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Superb and sensual. Excellent.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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Nicely done, Fia, but it seems to need just a bit of punctuation to help with the flow, I wasn’t sure at first how to read it, stopping after each line, then going, “Oh, I see it now.” Nice work.
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Thank you, FlatDaddy;))
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You can beat an egg and a drum and a carpet .. and a few other things besides .. but you just can’t beat a bit of sync now can ya eh’ .. Very much enjoyed the ride Fia .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Hold on we have to go back to the beginning, we will return on your tightness
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Thank you, Me;))
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Fia, this read like an erotic encounter of a bewitchingly soft yet libidinal ambrosia. There is magic here that takes me into the heart of the poem. I could feel the silken sheets and that last line has to be the most original and brilliant ending “liquid ambrosia”.
John
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I wanted it be soft. Thank you
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Read MoreComing to terms with the self, in ways unique to the self days over days. Seekers seek the self. Stealth in a wealth of shadows. The mist of this hallucinatory height Is made of: Mountain. This pen a font of Fountain. Chips pushed forward lips speaking onward to the seeking: Stalwart Poet. You fuckin know it. World I Set on Fire ***Cipher Poems***
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So burn it all my friend, with your firesome pen!
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Dope vibe!!!
Much respect
Naaj
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That’s some heavy fucking irony, Keith. The title reminded of an old song, though it had to do with trains it wasn’t this twisted. Appreciate you.
Damian