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Read Moregirl, you been sitting on that barstool but you ain't drinking you running or thinking?cuz I know the look in those eyesstare into the darkness they can't hideevery nightwhat's on your mind? I’ve been on the outside looking inonly my past knows...
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Mary and I thank you from the bottom of our hearts. This was an expression long in the building and much in need of voice.
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerhouse,both of you are amazing women.
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Thank you so much, Thomas. We greatly appreciate you
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Really love this, the two of you simply rock Ladies
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We needed to give this one its moment. Thank you so much on behalf of both of us
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Willow & Mary. I love the guitar riff in this, and have got to ask what was that? A cello or violin at the beginning and end with a distorted effect on it. Whoever made that call, that was pretty cool. Nice collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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That was indeed a cello! That was my call. Cello has the same deep gut effect as bass…which is my obsession. Mary digs violin more. But I’m rubbing off on her. 😉 We poured ourselves into this one. Thank you so much, my friend
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This is one inspirational powerhouse of a collab
Take a bow, ladies.
Ya’ll have definitely outdone yourselvesMuch respect
Naaj
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Thank you so much, Naaj. This was a labor of love and a reignition for us both. I’ll pass along your words to Mary 😊
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Oh, I love this, Brenda. With the depth of decisions.
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thank you dearest Adagio I’m happy you liked it ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. A heartfelt write my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you for the love on this I’m happy it spoke to you ❤️
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We are hardest when judging ourselves not even realizing we don’t deserve it for even the father forgives. Tight
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Your words hit with the might of a sledgehammer my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here it’s felt deeply ❤️
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Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas I was reading your poem and realizing my drug use puts me in danger much like your poem I would never intentionally kill myself but accidental could happen it’s sobering ❤️
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This shows your talent as a writer and very good.
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thank you dearest Adagio I was drawing on my days in the past and my current addictions ❤️
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hello dearest poet this was from a time in my life I was taking about twenty sleeping pills at a time not realizing that could kill me as I was writing this I thought I would never kill myself intentionally but then I remembered my behavior and how a lot of famous people who have died unitentionally it was sobering thank you for being thoughtful ❤️
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you are rude and thoughtless…
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian thank you my friend ❤️
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Chère C.,
You hit hard.
And every blow a hit.
Don’t know which source you are getting from.
Seems like I’ll never tire of it.
Warm regards, Gus-
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hello dearest Gus thank you for you interest I draw from the illusive thing called love ❤️
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There is a way you have of taking us inside, where we see and feel what you’re expressing. Not to the depth you do, I’m sure, but this one is potent. Beautifully aching. I can feel the pressure of the words trying to escape the heart, the chest 🧡
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thank you beautiful Willow you feel so deeply I can tell by your comment thank you lovely soul ❤️
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Well now, this is superb. Probably one of my favs of yours now. I’m interested in what inspired it. It has a great deal of weight being shifted from line to line, as if you can’t settle it in one spot. A heaviness lingering, perhaps.
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hello dearest Styxian it is a heaviness within me for all the beings I loved and let down… sometimes I feel I should never been given the chance to fail someone so utterly thank you for your beautiful thoughts ❤️
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Perhaps! The best poem that I have read on Stars. I am not very good with comments, but this one grabbed my soul, Lady! This one deserves an award.
Al
PS. Keep in touch.