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Mmm.. I don’t know. I’m thinking a hydrangea Peter..
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Maybe a rose….beautiful but thorny or horny….lol
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Ooo! I like it, lol 😜
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You’re still churning out some beautiful poetry Lady, Tight
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Thanks sweetness.
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Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. This one has layers and I dig layers. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend.
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Another outstanding poem, Gawdess!
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Daniel, thank you. xx
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Amazing! You’re a talent.
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Takes one to know one Keith 😉 xx
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xxox
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Read MoreOne moment you are concious.The next half awake.One moment you are walking. The next you are in a lake.It feels like an endless loop.Of fatigue,exhaustion. As I watch the flowers grow.My eyelids slowly begin to fall.Because I spent my whole day...
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Read MoreGood day to all of you!In 2018, when ‘songwriters in the Kitchen’ was still proudly up and running, there was a ‘Same Lyrics’ challenge going on for Christmas. I vowed not to do challenges and I vowed not to...
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The song is really beautiful, warm and joyous… as I was reading I could feel the melody and beat of it, I love the repeation and alternation between “I” and “you”, it’s like making vows between each other, a truly romantic and lovely love poem.
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Chère L.,
Since I’m a quarter French, a typical French start.
Hope this finds you well.If this comment is what you meant in the message?
If you intended to send me a poem (?), please send it to the e mail address:
Duhsjaak.13@gmail.comThank you anyway very very much for the compliments.
I’ll pass half of them to Michael A who wrote the lyrics.À same lyrics challenge, means that everyone who wants to be involved, writes a song to the same lyrics.
I believe that roughly 15 persons participated. But I’m not sure. It’s 7 years ago?!Grateful for your read and listen!
Warm regards, Gus
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Beautiful work. Vivid and sharp.
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Hoi Thomas,
Hope this finds you well?!Thank you for the compliments.
And also on behalf of Michael A (north east England), very grateful for you listen!
Kind regards, Gus
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This is a sweet read, and it is not annoying at all.
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Chère F.,
Hope this finds you well?!I do admire your talent and your writes, so I love a compliment if it’s coming from you.
Thank you so much!Warm regards, Gus
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a heartwarming, endearing ink. beautifully written. i enjoyed the charming, lyrical fluidity.
thank you, for your lovely words and a warm welcome, both are appreciated!
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Chère C.,
Now nice to see you again.
I must have done something wrong, since the reply I typed was lost. Sorry for that.Anyway, I am grateful for your listen. Also on behalf of Michael A of course.
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Beautiful lyrics n great upbeat, bouncy music. Very much enjoyed it ❤️
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Chère I.,
Hope this finds you well.There is an English saying, I believe. Something like: A thing of beauty is a joy forever.
In this case the thing of beauty is Michael A’s Two hearts in the snow.
About 8 years old and we’re still thinking the same way about it.I’m grateful for ‘finding’ you again and grateful for your listen.
Al in all, this song has an amazing amount of listens since Michael A and I first posted it of approx 10.500. Depending on which fora iinclude in the counting.These figures seem harder nd harder to get in the post Corona times, but maybe you and me will team up for a coop?
It’s the talents like yours that keep on shining the forums nowadays.Thank you so much for the compliments!
Also on behalf of Michael A of course!
Warm regards, Gus
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with layers of depth my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Since I have not been posting because of work I am trying to give a little more. Thanks cuz
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Chère F.,
How can someone be powerful and sweet at the same time?
Lovely, what a lot of ‘tastes’ in one poem!Warm regards, Gus
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Thank you, Gus, for the compliment.
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and You my friend “stole” our interest and attention once again with your passionate and exquisite writing. I respect how each couplet both shows and tells us a story. Fantastic poem!
An espresso con panna to you.
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Thank you so much for that. Espresso con panna thank you Clay;))
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Enough said with a smile. Thank you, Jim;))
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Oooh, very clever!
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Thank you, Willow :))
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Really like that ending, tight
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Thank you ME:))
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Read MoreI’ll never pretend to be something I’m not. So you should know, I’m not a good girl by any means. The only time I take it as a compliment is when I’m on my knees. Or when I’m stuffing your mouth with these...
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It’s not for the Benedictine sandwich crowd but give me a Bud Light and beer nuts, and tickled my feel goods. Love it!
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Sincerest thanks Adagio,
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Unapologetically penned, PG. A very passionate write with seductive wordplay my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend. You are appreciated as always.
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Well written and quite exciting.
Mission accomplished PG you captured my attention from go to woe.
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Thank you Peter. A nice write to get the blood flowing to all the right places. 😉
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☺️ thank you Fia, always appreciate your feedback.
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“I do not love mundane” Yes, Gawdess! You kept me in it from the beginning to the end
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Straight to the point with sass, Tight
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Thank you ☺️ xx
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HJ thank you!! Always a pleasure. xx
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