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Read MoreClans of venomous spiders nurtured her from conception their black spiny spindle of legs wove her skin of immortal silk decades ago Spinnerets sparkle like poisonous ornaments from the wall of nightshade that blooms in her bedroom She’s innocence embodied in a toxic withered frame lean in a smidge closer her web of white gold sparkles like sugared...
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Hi Rob!! How are you doing amigo?
I’ve been working and taking digital art classes. I finally finished my book! I’m so excited. I’m waiting for my printed copies to arrive in the mail. It is titled Poetry Stained Teeth! It’s on Amazon and I’m looking to work on my marketing so lots going on. I’m so happy you stopped by and left me a comment. Your writing is golden so I appreciate you stopping by to say hello.
Now I need to encourage Mark to get his rolling!Later gator
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Perfect timing. I was in a friends OLD basement and saw three spiders to the right of the door that opens to the backyard. Creepy things for sure – and kind of big.
And as for women, I’ve met one too many who were there to spin their web. To catch their prey. But through my cleverness and acts of evasion I eluded them. But oh, what I could have had. :))))))
Nice one, Adel.
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Hey there Tim!
I literally freeze when I see spiders. Especially the big one’s. But they do make badass webs!
This write is an oldie but goodie. Trying to do a lot of things at once. I finally finished my first book. It’s small but lots of color
and art. It’s on Amazon titled Poetry Stained Teeth. I’m waiting on my books to arrive in the mail. A year’s worth of work!!I’m so proud of doing the cover and each page of art myself. I plan to do 3. I’m currently working on the first pages of my second book with the sub title The Golden Addition. Or maybe I’ll use the word addiction. 😂
The last book I want to do is a dark volume. Yikes!
I’m so happy to see commenting on my write amigo. It’s been a while:)
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Are you talking about my evil twin? She escaped? This is so good, and the way you wrapped it up with ” You know you want her to, was perfect.
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Hi Fia!
It’s been so long since I’ve posted anything. Thank you for dropping by with a comment. This is an oldie but goodie.
I already see how I want to do the art. lol. I want it to look like an antique Victorian picture.She could be my twin sister too!
Thanks for using the word perfect! Made my day:)
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It’s about time you posted something! I’m tired of everyone asking me where are you!
LOL. So pick up your own slack!
And here you are, finally! I sense the halloween theme that this seems to coincide with. And for the record, you’ve dressed a bit venomous before…I am so wrapped up.
Awesome visuals that you crafted within this clever write. Your artwork is equally impressive, but we must wait til ? For those.
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Hi baby!
I can’t let you be the only one posting. I’m sorry I’ve been slacking! I need to get back into writing more but the art takes me forever. And yes, I will gyrate you mister. Hahahaha
September and October are great inspirations for writing. This is an older poem but I thought I’d
post something since my writing has stalled. lol. Love you sweetie. I’ll call you in a bit. MWA!!!
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Lol, spiders aren’t really my thing, but I’m glad to see your writes again, anyways 🌼
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Hey Joe!!
This is an older one. Thought I’d try and post something. It’s been a while.
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment amigo:)Spiders at not my thing either. I appreciate from really far away!! In case that little guy decides to jump.
Then I’ll squash him like a cucaracha!! lolLater gator!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Adel. Incredible imagery my friend and an excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey! Thanks a ton amigo. It’s fixing to be October so I wanted to bring the spiders
You know a couple of years ago I started a poem titled Puppet Master inspired by the song from Metallica.
I’ve heard it before but it came on in the movie Stranger Things and boom! All this inspiration came so I jotted a few things down. Then I lost my notes!!! I need to find and finish!!Thanks for stopping by!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Incredible write my friend, really like this a lot. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊
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![Profile picture of Kelly Scheppers]()
It’s a beautiful thing when minds sync on one purpose. Your closing line couldn’t define it better!
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Thank you, Kelly;))
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![Profile picture of Styxian]()
Sweetly sung as whispers. A hint of seductive word play without being graphic. I like the subtlety. Leave the reader to build their own visions as they read. Well crafted Fia.
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Thank you, you know I can be “in your face” with the graphics. But I can tone it down as well.;))
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Thank you, Hj xx
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![Profile picture of Tim]()
Nicely done, Fia. Your romantic side is showing. 🙂
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(giggling) I can be romantic. Thank you, Tim;))
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🙂 I’ll bet you can.
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I am keeping all this romance together.;))
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Superb and sensual. Excellent.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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Nicely done, Fia, but it seems to need just a bit of punctuation to help with the flow, I wasn’t sure at first how to read it, stopping after each line, then going, “Oh, I see it now.” Nice work.
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Thank you, FlatDaddy;))
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You can beat an egg and a drum and a carpet .. and a few other things besides .. but you just can’t beat a bit of sync now can ya eh’ .. Very much enjoyed the ride Fia .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Hold on we have to go back to the beginning, we will return on your tightness
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Thank you, Me;))
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Fia, this read like an erotic encounter of a bewitchingly soft yet libidinal ambrosia. There is magic here that takes me into the heart of the poem. I could feel the silken sheets and that last line has to be the most original and brilliant ending “liquid ambrosia”.
John
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I wanted it be soft. Thank you
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Read MoreYou take me to a dream of nonsensical promisesOf rainbows and diamonds falling from the skyA kiss placed strategically on the browScreams of hidden thoughts and wants Why should we not indulge in a dreamAllow liberties and fanciful playOnce awakened...
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This is whimsical with beautiful wording throughout, Fia. Really nice work. 🙂
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Thank you, Tim;)) <3
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I felt instantly swept into a pure, sensuous dream. Every line is brimming with color, desire, and such a playful, intoxicating energy. It’s more than a cocktail; it’s a feast for the senses.
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Thank you, Romaj…It’s a feast for the senses…appreciate that;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I love the playful nature of this write my friend. Excellent! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Nice work Fia. You’re a wonderful poet!
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Thank you so much, Vision
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Read MoreIt's so long since I felt your touch. How do we sleep in the same bed and not even graze each other? You pushed me away, With self-deprecating statements. You tell me you are sorry. As I suffer from your exile. Till death we said. How...
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Haunted by passion and intimacy gone cold and pallid. I can relate. The question is, how do you reignite a fizzled star.
Always a pleasure
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That is the question. Thank you Detritus;))
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Its quite painful to be in a relationship when libidos get out of sync.
You’ve captured it perfectly in this piece.
I haven’t found a fix …. hope you are more successful.
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Thank you, Peter;))
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It’s a sad story as old as time itself. I’m sure at some time in the past cavemen through their cavewomen out into the mud, and space alien women are floating in space because they didn’t clean the dashboard of the UFO controls good enough. 🙂
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Thak you, Tim;))
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This really captures the ache of a love that feels distant while still sharing the same space. “How did we die? / Laying in this bed.” says so much with so few words.
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Thank you, Romaj;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. I felt the ache in your words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Painful, tragic, brilliantly told in this piece. Great!!
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Thank you, yes, it is tragic.;))
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Over sometimes long before it is declared over. No winners. A tie in last place. A slow painful death of a relationship…
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Agreed, Thank you, Paula;))
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I think I’ve been in that bed–or one very similar. You express very well the cold shoulder of love collapsing. I wish love potions were real.
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Fia, this is a heartbreakingly powerful poem. This poem about what happens when one partner in a relationship lets go is such a real human experience that you put into words the burned across the page.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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And there was me lamenting where have all the DU gone? And in the space of a weekend, your good self, Mark and Gary appear and life seems a little bit normal again. I stay away from spiders these days. I can’t tell you how much I wish the best for you and Styx. Welsh Rob