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    takin the scenic route

    I stumble over metaphorsb/c language isn’t enough for youand silence is too muchbut I should probably say…I’m spillin out all over the placeall tangled up in half formed thoughtsdraggin my feelins thru the dirtto try to make them look...

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    sadness

    sending thoughts out upon highhear me God, my Fatherwith sighs I say my prayersa whisper and a calmbeautiful stillness in the chaosI'm neither here nor therethings have slowed down and I pauseto reflect on your smile and the day...

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    • Brenda, I cannot imagine the pain you’re going through. Losing a parent is nothing compared to losing a child. My heart and prayers with you. You can do him justice now for holding onto all the memories and writing about them. I hope that helps a lil’.

      Daniel

      • hello Daniel thank you for the love I don’t want to quit writing but I can’t get past my sadness in it 💕

    • Your beautiful tribute Brenda is heavenly. My thoughts go out to you. xo

      • thank you graciously dearest Keith I don’t want to be sad anymore but it occurs to me I am altered I deeply appreciate your presence and love here 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • hello beautiful Angel thank you what a tender and loving song…it’s very hard I keep remembering the day he was born and his milestones I miss him…I want to quit being sad but I don’t know how…I appreciate you listening 💕

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    Uncrossed Lines

    It is still all that defines...all of these still uncrossed lines,boundaries I have not yet crossedin a life of die as of yet untossed. Having traveled the whole world,while keeping myself unfurled,I remain such a bundled mystery,with so much you...

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    Let Us Run Away

    takes faith all day to believe in true love all night to say no to temptation with many judging eyes many pressures in life feels like I'm going mad you’re suffering within your own mindcan there just be nothing...

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    She Doesn't Think Too Much

    she never likes to think too much she rather flirt with men at the bar looking cute with her short shorts and tank top takes them back to her place yeah, the rent's pass due and the dishes need done but she forgets all about that when...

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    • Love this. Your stories are intriguing and raw.

      • Always felt like I needed to keep my poetry raw. I never wanted to censor anything down.

        Thanks for the read, much appreciated.

    • Uncompromisingly penned, Nick. Raw and to the point, and it goes on in the world today. Powerful work. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • I think it goes on a lot, for sure. We all have are ways of dealing with life. Everyone has and addiction. Life can beat us down also so sometimes it’s easier to just embrace those addictions.

        Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.

    • Hehe, in her own way yes. I kinda loosely based this off of a friend of mine. Though I made her sound like more of a slut haha. But she was very flirty, the life of the party kinda person. Whenever you could get her to talk seriously though it would be about how she was having a lot of family issues. Which showed me that the flirting was a bit of a way to deal with those emotions.

      Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.

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