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    wild flower of the valley

    risking it all in the pink sunshinemy blush talks to youin a low persuasive waya gentle growl says you're feeling mesomething I can feel in my tummyyou're pretty and I love thatbut you're also hard and that's what really...

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    Typical Saturday Night

    Bloodshot skies acting like a backdrop  Trees sway amongst a whispering wind Redemption glows within the moonlight While destruction lies around the bend   Seductive rivers carry manipulated beasts Who bring war to those considered different Hatred fuels these sinful calloused hearts By using influence to seduce...

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    • I guess we all have our interpretations. I see a line of young people heading into a club or hanging out outside it to hear hip hop or rap. Many may disagree, but I see that kind of music as negative and detrimental. Just my two cents.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. To me every kind of music or creative outlet has its negative sides, as well as its positives. Nothing in this world is exempt from good and evil. That’s just my two cents, for what they’re worth. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Tremendous flow here, my friend.

    • hello dearest Damian either they don’t read the situations or they are goading up to reveal what we know… through manipulation of a situation…they get me all the time this is one of your best in my opinion 💕

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I couldn’t agree with you more, the truth will hopefully be revealed. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved those lines as well, you’re right there is no such thing as a safe place in the world’s current state. Happy to read your commentary again, hope your music projects are going well. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • “While destruction lies around the bend”

      It’s interesting how the word lies changes the entire tone when read as one definition over the other. This is such a cleverly written piece. And powerful, as you excel at, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Loved that line as well. It is interesting how it changes the tone, I love the little things like that about writing, seems you do too. Nice to know I got company! Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Fanfuckingtastic Damian. Powerful and packs a tremendous punch!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I do what I can. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I kinda get an image of friends drifting apart maybe due to political differences.

      Great ink, friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see that, and that’s why I love poetry, every interpretation is open to the reader. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    Am I Woke?

    well I am brokebut that's nothing newI just don't know how to take the insultI care and acknowledge inequitysorry, I am a brown manso I know how it feels to lose a job over skin color I also know...

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    • To see the world and its inhabitants as they truly are and be able to accept them is being “woke” then I am too. Nice stream of consciousness.

      • I will never be ashamed of supporting those who are just trying to live their lives. I mean I feel extra worried for trans people. When you have the vice president calling trans people deranged it’s mind blowing. Scary times.

        Thanks for the read, much appreciated.

    • Spitting fire, Nick. Into the book it belongs! A very powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • I believe you can never lose when you fight with truth.

        Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.

    • !!!!🙌 So on point, my friend! That’s all I got for words here. You done said it all🙌!!!

      • ✋ such a great comment. Honestly I’m just happy to see there are people that see the ugliness that is happening.

        Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.

    • Hell yeah! 💥
      Really, it’s gotta be the most lame-ass insult I’ve ever heard. If someone is calling people “woke”, does that mean they’re admitting that they’re asleep..? And… proud of it..? 😆 Geez.

      Love this write!
      ❤️k

      • Yeah, it is very stupid. And yet they keep saying it like they’re on to something. Literally they’re saying we shouldn’t think. It’s just as stupid as that movie don’t look up.

        Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.

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    nothing.

    where does poetry go when it dies?in a world where it's not cool to feelor even have an independent thoughtguess all art gets bought stripped down and sold for scrapsthen addicts like me find some holedeep down in the...

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    • I am reading and I will do my best to get eyes on the creatives. Being a creative person is never easy, but it is a necessity in my eyes.

      • Art is always subjective but I think losing DUP was a big hit to us poets. But I really hope to see more friendly faces here. I think once people get the hang of things they would see it’s even better.

        I try to do my part as well but life is busy these days.

        Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.

    • Well I was hooked from the first line, where does poetry go when it dies? I guess into oblivion to exist but be unseen and unheard. It’s crazy how we have so devalued and under appreciated art in any of its true forms when the world we live in now screams all the things that should make it thrive.

      • Devalued is pretty much everything now. It’s sad, but maybe one day things will come around. I mean if vinyls can make a comeback, why not?

        Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.

    • Mic Drop! Excellent write, Nick. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I will never surrender my ink! We’re not dying. We’re simply finding pockets of safety in a world gone mad. If I could put this on my reading list, I would…twice. Damn…

      • A very mad world these days. Which honestly with as many opinions people have you think they would want to write poetry instead of tweets.

        Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.

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    comfort zone

    it is with sadness I writeare you seeing metouch a feeling and get to know methe internal conflictweighing on me darkness and lightdepression and I don't talkmy thoughts grow darkwhen I think no one caresmy glaring faults all too...

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    • That’s terrific and honest.

      Its hard to touch another’s suffering unless you’ve suffered yourself….I feel your pain.🙏

    • You have captured here that which is often so hard to put into words.

    • I’ve been depressed in the past, but some are clinically depressed and can’t get out of it without prescribed drugs. I feel for those people. It’s as though I’ve been released from jail due to time and age and they’re still in.
      This really hits the nail on the head.

      • hello dearest Tim I’m glad you got out of it it’s not nice especially when it comes and goes without reason thank you for the love💕

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