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Fia Naturie
7 months, 1 week ago

I feel that you pulled a lot of Greek mythology inspiration here? I could be wrong. I like the piece
- Benjamin Scraps
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Greco-Roman culture & philosophies, plus some New Testament references. Legionnaires, Roman soldiers with a particular skill at building roads, were not paid in gold but salt, which is where we derive the word ‘salary’. That might be somewhat of an urban legend, but it seems to be at least rooted in truth.
  
  Great eye again, thank you!!
  - Fia Naturie
    7 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thank you;))
Jacob erin-cilberto
7 months, 1 week ago

I think many of us feel like machines. We work 9-5 jobs…like factory work, restaurant work…I did both.
Watched the clock…tried to have fun, but machines don’t laugh or cry.
This poem has a sense of rhythm that matches that routine…and the rhyme scheme is subtle but smart.

Really enjoyed and felt this read….related from my days before I got lucky and found teaching.
j.

Backdeckbenny (Peter)
7 months, 2 weeks ago

Terrific write

🙏
- Crimsin
  7 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  hello dearest Benny thank you graciously❤
Jacob erin-cilberto
7 months, 2 weeks ago

we own our choices good or bad. And for those we regret, we can ask forgiveness and do what we can of good deeds to even up the ledger. Similar to what the Chorus in Oedipus spoke of at his end.
Fate took him in one direction…he attempted to take himself as far as he could in the other before his death.
Really good piece.
j.
- Crimsin
  7 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  hello dearest Jacob I do my best and it is hard to let go of regret but I ask forgiveness and I do try to focus on being positive thank you for your thoughts on this❤
RPM
7 months, 1 week ago

I really appreciate an honest piece like this. The inner monologue was captivating. Thanks for sharing it.
- Crimsin
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  thank you graciously dearest poet I often do that I’m happy it worked for you ❤️

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