Very nicely done. The rhymes are tight. The story is well structured as well.
Great result here.

Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

One of my favorites by you. Excellent writing, Crimsin.

Your writing always puts a spell on me. Great work Brenda. xo

Magically written, dear Crimsin. Your words are powerful and enchanting!

It makes you think if they have someone to love on them would they end up that way

Thanks for reading. The system creates problems.
Regards

Nery intimidating piece. You can feel the subtle threat in the words woven here

Powerfully penned, Nick. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Outstanding write Nick. Nicely done!

This is an excellent socially critic writing. Especially the perspective it is written from speaks louder than a thousand words. It reflects exactly what we are to the people in power: nothing but in significant bugs. Great work my friend!

You started this brilliant piece with an almost verbatim quote from the colostomy bag in chief and then proceeded to emphasize how he and those who follow his cult think and feel. Very powerful

Wow, harsh as fuck!

I’m a bit mind-blown and inspired at the same time.

You have a very crystal edge. x

Unapologetically penned, Nick. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The idea of angels vs devils is intriguing. Brings to home the truth, we are all a balance of light and dark. Just depends on which side we swing further into at any given time. Apathy is a thing I simply cannot condone. It’s a passive agreement to side with dark. Just boldly side and be honest, in my opinion. I know people like you describe up there. Aggravating