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Read MoreBuilt a foundation on a fault line Temperamental bias stirs beneath No substance flows from the vine Every shortcut is laced with grief When the walls tumbled down It revealed a foolish arrogance Under that smile lives a frown A string-puppet born to dance Rain pours from...
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for the birthday wishes.. Appreciate you, cuz.
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Happy birthday my dear pisces friend… a big hug!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for the birthday day wishes. Actually, I’m a Triple Pisces.. A big hug back brother! Appreciate you.
Damian
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First, I hope you had a fantastic and soul-filling birthday. I have read this one 3 times now. I finish, sigh, scroll back up and read it again. It sinks into the mental marrow and stirs thoughts. You are a master of layers, my friend. I’m glad this one bubbled out of the “not yet” vault. It needed sunlight and shadows on its bones
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was a good birthday overall, played some piano, talked to J.J. Burton, and spent time with the wife and kids. Thank you for the b-day wishes. I definitely write in layers, probably because everything I observe has layers, including myself and humans in general. I come by it naturally I guess. lol. The “not yet” section has tons of writes in it, although some need work or at the very least a tweak or two. Always enjoy your commentary my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Congratulations Damian on finding these words & breathing fresh life into each one .. Oh’ and on your birthday too .. Neville 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Thanks for the b-day wishes kind Sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Captivating and intriguing piece.
You’ve got me hooked from the start. I was drawn to this by its title.
Strong choice of words. Exquisite in its own way.
A bold and daring read. x
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Rosie. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your amazing commentary and support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian this song on mortality and the grim reaper was one of your very best. The sheer lyrical strength was formidable here. I loved every roaring line. You really made this come alive for me. I am amazed.
John
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Thank so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m amazed after 35 summers of doing this writing thing I haven’t lost my love for the craft. I’ve had ups and downs sure, if I were to ever lose that love then I might have something to worry about. lol. Enjoyed your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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We long for what we can not have…. I don’t know why but I think it’s a universal law of nature.. nice poem
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hello dearest Sam thank you graciously for the love on this write ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. An amazing and passionate write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the beautiful comment ❤️
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe Issue has been resolved with the editing. Thank you
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Read Morefists too quickmouth too loudanger always waitinjust behind my teeth I was the kinda boyfathers warn their daughters boutbut she never listened she looked at melike the noisewasn’t the whole story she saw the boywho wrote poemswho played classical musicwith bloodied knucklesand...
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This is a sweet poem. Make one think of the past.
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thank you fia
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Nicely put. Sometimes we take chances and hope for the best.
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appreciate it adelphina
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Beautifully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. There is always a person who can see through all the smoke and mirrors one might try to hide behind, I speak from experience of course. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you
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Read MoreWe know there is an issue with the editing capability. We have been working on it and hope to resolve it as soon as possible. I will keep you all posted
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Happy Birthday cuz. This is one of those poems that make you feel…sad while telling you the truth.