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Read Moreripped from the mouth of sound a gapin holewhere hammer should break bone hands dropivory grindin under skinsilence echos where it used to strike scale shattersedges crackinbroken teeth in the dark chords crawl forwarddraggin themselvesthru blood and tone I slam the weight downagainagainas...
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appreciate it
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I like the brutal choice on words.
I can sense a lot of toughness from the writer.
This is slightly mentally challenging in a way that captivates the reader.
Ready for some more…
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thank you Rosie
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“chords crawl forward
draggin themselves
thru blood and tone”Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend it always gets interesting when the piano is mentioned in your work. So many great lines but the one above just spoke to me. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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appreciate you Damian…always an easier write when involve piano.
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Read Morehottie with the body gimme some love i want it sick rub me vicious with only bad intentions soft hands getting me rock hard keep it intense try my patience jump on as i pin you to the wall open up wide fuck you raw get down on your knees suck it...
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Well…damn… It has a vibe you can almost put music to and hear it at night. Yup…naughty nights;)
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Fuck Yeah!! This is XXX in all it’s glory!
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Damian DeadLove and
Brandon Houser are now friends
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Read MoreWhere the Magnolia Sings and My Mother Keeps the Moon in a Jar - Part TwoThe Shattered Glass The afternoon sun stretched lazily across the floorboards, casting long, warm rectangles of light over my Batman figures. The “Pow!” and “Zap!”...
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With age often comes wisdom and more appreciation for our past than may have originally been felt. I think the lesson in this was the appreciation for the women in his past life, his mother being the leader of them all, and the little lessons learned along the way.
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Your perspective here is right on target here my friend. As the writer I can truly say you have focused on the heart of this story and gleaned the meanings within. I am so deeply grateful to you for sharing your understanding and what you took from my words. Yes the mother is the leader of these women in his life. I think I read something a psychologist wrote along those lines long ago. You really understood exactly this theme and delved into this meaning most aptly. I thank you so much. 🙂
John
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No problem, John. Sorry it took so long. Been busy. 🙂
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My friend no problem about waiting. Never a problem. Very much appreciate you and your words here. 🙂
John
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Read MoreWhere the Magnolia Sings and My Mother Keeps the Moon in a Jar - Part One The air in New Orleans during the summer of 1973 didn’t just sit; it breathed. It was a heavy, velvet presence, smelling of damp...
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Rather the stick huh? A firm hand to keep in line. this is a good opening to this. this felt like I read two full pages here.
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Glad you liked my opening my friend. Indeed it was at least two pages. Yes the boy in the story liked bossy women who kept him in line. They excited him. Thank you so much for reading my friend. He is just discovering his submissive feelings. This is the beginning of his femdom interests.
John
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You have a really nice writing Style I’ve always enjoyed. I like the contrast between Sonia and the mother. In a world of wonderment, a little boy finds his first crush. It’s an ideal life of wonder and amazement. I believe if there was a hundred dollar bill in his pocket he would have given it to her. lol
The mother has wisdom enough to know where his feelings will be in years to come.
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I can’t thank you enough my friend. I am thrilled by your apt and keen observations on this story. Truly you have captured its essence in your review. I am deeply appreciative. Indeed love that comment if there was a hundred dollar bill in his pocket he would have given it to her. lol. Priceless. Indeed I am sure he would have given it to her. And yes truly the mother knew how his feelings would evolve and already were. Thank you so much. 🙂
John
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The “cut it off, cut it all the way off ” Just screams “I don’t want this anymore” This holds a lot emotion