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Read Moremorose feelings entertainmy sexuality tied to darknessstunningly beautiful, captivating my soulseducing my flesh, lust flashes and I cavea seduction of spiritquietly amusing me, while my thoughts are abusedin the thick of things I moantasting the aether and the need...
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hello dearest Jim good evening thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Very haunting and pure shaking.
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hello dearest Adagio good morning thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undercurrents my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
This is my Free verse
Do you hear the sun?
As the rays beat down on the ground,
It is subtle but poignant
It’s purpose is to burn.
The exquisite heat,
does not match the coolness in your eyesDo you smell the wind?
Multicolored in its complexity
Surrounds you,
Invades your very core.
It gives you life.
Then withdraws to take your b…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Beautifully imagined, Fia, an excellent effort!
Deserves a VERY strong title!ISSUES TO CONSIDER:
1. Unnecessarily Capitalizing every line, which tends to confuse when one complete line, thought, etc; begins or ends, effectively stumbling the flow, attention, and overall magical smoothness of a poem’s captive spell.
2. Poetic voice … how a poe…Read More-
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I’ll work on it. Thanks for the guidance
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![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
You make sharing a distinct pleasure. 🙏
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good evening dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate you very much ❤️
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![Profile picture of Daniel Long]()
All-out effort as always! Never cease to impress!
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Daniel thank you graciously have a good day today ❤️
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Wow this is dark and really good. Bravo
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful Fia good morning thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian thank you for showing me love on these ❤️
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This is a heartfelt tribute to your friends. Lovely
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
I was just looking back last night over the years how people influenced me you at Starsrite do as well thank you lovely lady ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent tribute my friend, some people come into our lives to change it for the better. At least that’s been my experience. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian it was all worth the experience even seeing some fade they find my heart often ❤️
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Ahh, Brenda, I think our days in the Underground molded and changed us all in some fashion. You will always be my leather thigh high stiletto boot stomper. Nobody lays down fire like you. There’s a lot of echoing back to us still, isn’t there from those halls? I found my fierce…in no small part by watching you rock it out so fearlessly. Love you, girl 🧡
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