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Read MoreI Kissed A Girl (many times)...I kissed a girl and I liked it!Stop right there! Hey, Katy Perry...there was no cherry chapstick!This is about me - not you!We met in the ladies room...you may have heard a story.I wear...
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I accidentally posted this same submission under A Squirrel. It was pointed out to me and after figuring out how to edit – the right one is up now.
I get loopy sometimes. I keep copies and cut and paste. It went bonkers, but it is corrected.
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Read MoreMoonlit screams as they ripple the air from the grave of a girl. Moonlit corpse as she appears through a blanket of mist. Moonlit ghost as in life, she’s lost, angry, whispers secrets. Candlelit giggles as she’s in the flesh her glinting emerald eyes....
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I love the focus you have on the light either the moon or the candle. Enjoyed this
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Excellent write with amazing imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Morea predisposition for depression swaymy feelings follow, and I was waylaidsuccumbing to the malady, I achesinister understanding, it would not alleviatethe darkness cloying devastateAnd in my compromised position, I vownot to placate people anymorethen swallow down my emotionsbecoming sorrowful...
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I suffered from it when I was younger for various reasons. Your poem spotlights it in an artistic way. Excellent poem crimsin.
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hello dearest Tim I understand I suffer from it out of loneliness I can make friends I can’t keep them thank you for the lovely comment 💕
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U got me forever like it or not 😝😜🤪
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Powerful work. Tremendous.
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good evening dearest Thomas thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. I have had problems keeping friends as well, I can totally relate. Superb write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest damian I think my problem lies in the inability to properly set boundaries and when I finally stand up for myself it’s with anger and people are taken aback I think if I set consistent boundaries from the start it woud be better my problem is I see good in everybody thank you for understanding 💕
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Hello Brenda. Magnificent piece of writing here. So many suffer with loneliness and depression. It’s not a good feeling at all. Stellar work my friend. xo
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hello dearest Keith good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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hello beautiful Mary I was watching Wednesday today on Netflix when this poem came to mind I’m happy you liked it I deeply cherish your thoughts 💕
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I love Wednesday!! Thoroughly enjoyed this gothic write:).
There is only one reason to unsheathe a sword! To bring the carnage!-
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hello beautiful Adelphina ahh yes carnage I guess in this write I was going for a willing sacrifice but carnage there would be lol I love your comment thank you and p,s. I love Wednesday too I feel like I was born in the wrong family sometimes 💕
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Brilliantly penned, Brenda. This is an incredible dark write my friend, excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreVicious eyes,ferocious smile, and anass that begged to berubbed all night, likeBuddha promises good luck.But what thatass brought, wasjail, soup lines, andhomeless shelters.The heart pounds thehead, then the feet poundthe street;walking mile after mile,aimless roaming,doe eyed thinkingWhat went wrong?Where...
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Those assess have been known to stir up a lot of trouble. Sadly, I must stay away from them. 🙂
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lol. Thanks, Tim.
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hello dearest Thomas it this saying her ass got you in trouble? in any case it’s a hell of a story 💕
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yes. lol. Thank you.
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Yeah, a nice-looking ass will lead you down the wrong road. lol nicely done
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lol. Thanks.
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I could eat my meals of a nice ass.
Great write and very true about the power of a nice derriere.
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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Thank you so much.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Words of wisdom my friend, an exceptional write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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lol. Thank you, my friend.
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You’re amazing with your dialogue. Always enjoy your writing.