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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Silence
Sit in silence
Watch and observe
They tell you things that are unspoken
As they are speakingHidden truths
Covered in a blanket of lie’s
Design to confusePracticed smiles
Paired with dead eyes
You wait…Wait to see what’s the hook
What’s the product
What’s the goalThere is only one purpose
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Read MoreSit in silence Watch and observe They tell you things that are unspoken As they are speaking Hidden truths Covered in a blanket of lie’s Design to confuse Practiced smiles Paired with dead eyes You wait… Wait to see what’s the hook What’s the product What’s the goal There is only one...
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Thank you Crimsin. I go through times when I am very quiet and I notice things that I normally would not. It’s just a thought that came to me to write about.
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I understand I too quietly observe within myself when I talk too much I am uncomfortable ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. I think being quiet and observing allows us to see things we normally miss because we’re paying attention instead of talking or communicating. Just my opinion though. lol. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I agree with that cuz;))
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I don’t think most people are comfortable around others who are silent.Silence scares them because they might have to confront themselves honestly.
I really like this one Fia.
Funny though, even the silent ones sometimes talk too much….but I feel that might be a coping strategy for anxiety.🙏
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It makes them uncomfortable for sure. Thank you Backdeckbenny;))
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I liked this piece Fia. Nice.
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Thank you so much Amethyste;))
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I guess no one would like to be around me because I’m always quite even whether Im around people or alone.
Me I like the silence myself
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There are times I go silent. I just need to think. thank you Lizz:))
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Thank you for all that you do for the community. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian;)
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good
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Thank you;)
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Chère F.,
You manage to get this place more and more like a genuine corner of heaven.
Thank so very very much!
Warm greetings, Gus-
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Thank you Gus, appreciate that;)
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Testing comments!!!
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Holding Hands
When they began
They held hands
They smiled
They illuminated the skyChairs were held
Giggles slipped freely
And the thought of
What base is a good one for this dateTime goes by
Rings were bought
Vows were said
In laws glare rivaling Spoke on star trek at Dr. McCoyEvery step in life taken
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There is a motion, a movement to everything, to life. It has a direction and it is forward, not backward. For love to last, it has to change as the people involved change and as the world around them change. I have found this is how love, or any relationship, evolves, strengthens and continues. It is fun to remember the way we were, but even more…Read More
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I do not mind at all. I love the responses I receive from my poems.
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I enjoyed this one. Without a doubt, if holding hands is how it ends…I would not change a thing.
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Thank you Angel Louise;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. Dig the Star Trek reference by the way. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you cuz. I am a Star Trek fan lol:))
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“Would you ever want the loop to end?“
That’s a great, almost philosophical question. Some people like to escape a loop because they only see the endless repetition of the same actions. To me it holds the chance to experience new aspects of old routines on the basis of familiar facts. It’s adventurous and reliable at the same time.
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Thank you Sappho;))
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I recently had a co worker/friend who lost her husband. He was a young guy too. I read this feeling like you could have wrote this for them, and my heart breaks all over. Thank you for this sad beautiful read.
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Thank you Brandon;))
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Powerful and poignant. Great write.
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Thank you Thomas;))
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Wow a lot of times if the love and bond is that strong it would be hard to live without them.
I know a friend who recently past a few months after because he couldn’t live without his beloved wife.Powerful great write
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That does happen. If the bond is that strong. thank you Lizz:))
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Finding a soul mate is hard enough in a lifetime but then losing them?
Yes, that ending line does beg the question many people would agree to.
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Thank you, Wally;))
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hello lovely Fia very interesting write your right of course I tend to talk too much great wite ❤️