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Read MorePromises, promises. Apple-feighned oranges. Addicts claim rehab, yet itch to have more of this.Order this, order that. Bought a fish, got a cat. Bigger boats needed, yet neither floats even. Buyers remorse? Get me all worked up then buy me a horse. I'm addict by choice. Level headers rejoice! I'm...
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent write my friend and congrats on being selected for the Anthology. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! 🙏🏻
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Biggie said, “more money, more problems.” Our grandfather said, “we we lived happily without it until we could afford it or believed that we could. Tight and congrats
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Truth 🙏🏻 Thank you for the kind words!
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Excellent piece of poetry here. Congratulations for being selected for the Anthology.
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Thank you so much Visions!
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Congratulations! I can’t wait until it comes out.
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Thank you! 💕 I can’t wait either! I think it comes out at the end of the month.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreUnjust jealousyhas taken over meI cannot believethat you cannot seethat he is for me I will channel this rageas my pen flies across the pageThere is no smoke or sageThat will bless what is coming in spades You need to understandWhen...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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hello beautiful Fia this is perfectly written and it’s true older women no more how to please a man I like an older man myself combined with a little arrogance great write ❤️
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🩷thank you crimsin
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Love the flow first. but also the attitude of claiming what’s yours. Tight
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Thank you Me 😉
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This is honest, real and demanding. Well said Fia.
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Thank you, Vision;)
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That flow and to the point understanding hit straight on
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Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
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I love this one, Fia.
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Thank you Atticus
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This is raw possession and feral confidence on the page—jealousy sharpened into language instead of apology.
It’s confrontational without flinching, and the voice knows exactly how far to lean into menace before it becomes theater.-
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Thank you, Thomas
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I’m digging the attitude and confidence. Telling it like it is in your own sense of style.
Back off my man! This is fun to read and had a swag urban feel to it.
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Haha Thank you. I guess I was really feeling this piece
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That’s tellen her. When Fia lays down the law, watch out! lol Nice one. 🙂
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Well, thank you, Tim.
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“There’s something that comes with age and time” there is something about this line that speaks with stoicism and control which also lets a little leeway to catch a case.
I loved the underlying theme, she may try tempt him but you have his heart.
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Thank you, Wally;))
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This is a subtle warning huh. LOL.
You make it seem “nice” because it rhymes. But so does “sharp” and “harp” -which is what they will be playing when you finish them off. LOL.
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Thank you, Styxian;)) Not so subtle I guess
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This is dark and reminds me of something that could be a thriller movie
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good morning beautiful Fia thank you graciously it is just some of the spirits I encounter from time to time ❤️
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Excellent dark write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate you ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Dear B,
I can really appreciate the prayer in this poem. Being engulfed in God’s love and safety is such a great theme. A much needed reminder as we traverse this messy earth. H🌷
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hello beautiful Honoria so great to see you…you know I didn’t see the prayer within until you pointed it out just beautiful thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write really pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian