Unjust jealousy
has taken over me
I cannot believe
that you cannot see
that he is for me
I will channel this rage
as my pen flies across the page
There is no smoke or sage
That will bless what is coming in spades
You need to understand
When this woman claims that man
He is taken in hand
No judge or jury can command
So, since an education is required
Pull up a seat as this transpires
You see those lips
those hands
that Chest
I can say more, but I will say less
It’s funny how men think we will not fight
Allow them to go to this one or that one during the night
But what is mine will never be out of my sight
Either tied or chained sounds delicious, right
You can’t handle what is right next to me
You’re too young, too inexperienced, too full of Glee
You see, when the lights are dim or even red and sinewy
You couldn’t even do what he requires of me
There’s something that comes with age and time
You would have to be taught, but not by what’s mine
The young green grape hangs loosely on the vine
Is not much of a delicacy until it’s turned into wine
Now go away, little mouse, and eat someone else’s cheese
They may like what you have, and you wouldn’t be on your knees
Oh, that was harsh. Forgive me please
I think you understand now, you finally see
Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
Thank you, Damian 😊
hello beautiful Fia this is perfectly written and it’s true older women no more how to please a man I like an older man myself combined with a little arrogance great write ❤️
🩷thank you crimsin
Love the flow first. but also the attitude of claiming what’s yours. Tight
Thank you Me 😉
This is honest, real and demanding. Well said Fia.
Thank you, Vision;)
That flow and to the point understanding hit straight on
Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
I love this one, Fia.
Thank you Atticus
This is raw possession and feral confidence on the page—jealousy sharpened into language instead of apology.
It’s confrontational without flinching, and the voice knows exactly how far to lean into menace before it becomes theater.
Thank you, Thomas
I’m digging the attitude and confidence. Telling it like it is in your own sense of style.
Back off my man! This is fun to read and had a swag urban feel to it.
Loved it !
Haha Thank you. I guess I was really feeling this piece
That’s tellen her. When Fia lays down the law, watch out! lol Nice one. 🙂
Well, thank you, Tim.
“There’s something that comes with age and time” there is something about this line that speaks with stoicism and control which also lets a little leeway to catch a case.
I loved the underlying theme, she may try tempt him but you have his heart.
Great work
Thank you, Wally;))
This is a subtle warning huh. LOL.
You make it seem “nice” because it rhymes. But so does “sharp” and “harp” -which is what they will be playing when you finish them off. LOL.
Great little ditty, with some real smoke!
Thank you, Styxian;)) Not so subtle I guess