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Read MoreOne afternoon beneath a tree,my age no more than twenty-three,'pon Mary's supple, soft red cheekI placed a kiss that made me weak. In me, her charms endowed romancewith ev'ry quick, flirtatious glance.At every turn of every stroll,a kiss from her...
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I appreciate the comment, Thomas. Thank you.
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hello dearest Tim I love the rhythm and content of this write beautiful 💕
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Thank you Crimson. :))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Tim. Truly an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much, Damian.
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Superb work.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously sometimes I wonder if my writes aren’t strange but you have to go as inspired I’m happy this spoke to you 💕
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WHEN I SAY I FELT THIS, IT MEANS
I THIS EVERY EVERY WORD OF YOUR VOICE…BUT THIS RIGHT HERE, OOUUFF!“truthfully I fail in this mission every day
with small steps forward
becoming the companion that was first desired”DAMN IT WOMAN!
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that didn’t come out right, emotionally everywhere but you know what mean, ha!
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hello dearest poet thank you graciously good evening I wasn’t sure how this one would be accepted I’m so happy it spoke to you 💕 and yes I think your comment was great and I understood 😊
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. I think it’s something everybody fails at, myself included. It’s not meant to be easy, and sometimes are human nature gets the best of us. Very introspective write my friend. I can relate. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for understanding I hate like for example when I am short tempered I have to work on this 💕
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Glad you’re back and posting erotica.
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This was quite creative. How he… the conceited king shriveled and you arose to be queen and well replenished off him, haha. Love it!
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I can see your disappointed with men from this and your previous poems. Scars can go pretty deep and disappointment can be frustrating. But your expression is always deep in itself. That’s what writing is for.
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The night is also when the pain hits for me. I don’t know how it is for others but the older I get the more painful life becomes. More stressful and overwhelming. Guess getting help would be best, but I’m kinda the strong one that holds up my little world. No time for breakdowns.
*Hug* you’re not alone, friend.
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hello dearest Nick good morning I think as we get older because for one thing I know I was fearless and careless when I was younger..now I am careful and cautious understanding each moment is important thank you for the love here hugs on our shared pain in the night 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning Damian I hope you have a beautiful day thank you my friend 💕
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Vivid and sharp.
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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously have a great night 💕
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Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
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hello good morning dearest Gus I wasn’t writing yesterday and that line kept coming to mind just one line so I sat down and wrote it I’m happy it held your interest and you liked it great eye 💕
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This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!
Daniel
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hello dearest Daniel thank you graciously for the love on this write 💕it is deeply appreciated…
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you pardon my tardy response I appreciate you 💕
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Brilliant.