Captivating .. and most original .. I was hooked and played fairly and squarely from one end to the very other .. Indeed, I am glad I felt compelled to check in & stop by .. All Good Things and write on brother M.E .. Neville 😎👍

It’s pieces like this gives food for thought, they seem to relate and then they don’t. Tight work dude

I do enjoy the back-and-forth of a conversation. The last line made me say, “Aww.”

Cleverly penned, ME. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you my friend! I appreciate it “)

I like that! Indeed it was both best and worst times. Thank you so much! “)

This is much different than mainstream and I like it. Well written.

This feels like intimacy remembered through frost — awkward, tender, human as hell.
The beauty is in the fractures: jokes, longing, missed timing, love that never quite learned how to land.
Quietly devastating, and honest enough to sting.

Thank you, thank you Lady

This is cool. Frankenstein monster. Written with a Me style.

Dang you know how to compliment, thanks Lady

It’s good to to be able to keep up with site developments, thanks again Fia .. Neville 😎👍

Thanks, Fia. You keep us all well informed my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Very cool

Thank you..sometimes the mirror reflects more than just our reflection..they show our true soul..something haunting and beautiful at the same time..thank you for the comment

Phenomenally penned, Mstrmnd. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write with precise detail and an amazing flow. Dare I say it’s very lyrical my friend. Dig this. Appreciate you.

Damian

You ALWAYS write in deep details making your poem very special, making it feels real, like it’s here and now… another wonderfully passionate sweet romantic love poem✨💖🔥💕

The pair of beautiful bruises seemed to be a secret that was shared and created a fond memory

Tremendous. You nailed it.

Passionately penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian