The song is really beautiful, warm and joyous… as I was reading I could feel the melody and beat of it, I love the repeation and alternation between “I” and “you”, it’s like making vows between each other, a truly romantic and lovely love poem.

Beautiful work. Vivid and sharp.

This is a sweet read, and it is not annoying at all.

Chère F.,
Hope this finds you well?!

I do admire your talent and your writes, so I love a compliment if it’s coming from you.
Thank you so much!

Warm regards, Gus

a heartwarming, endearing ink. beautifully written. i enjoyed the charming, lyrical fluidity.
thank you, for your lovely words and a warm welcome, both are appreciated!
~ c

Chère C.,
Now nice to see you again.
I must have done something wrong, since the reply I typed was lost. Sorry for that.

Anyway, I am grateful for your listen. Also on behalf of Michael A of course.

See you around!
Warm regards, Gus

Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with layers of depth my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Chère F.,
How can someone be powerful and sweet at the same time?
Lovely, what a lot of ‘tastes’ in one poem!

Warm regards, Gus

and You my friend “stole” our interest and attention once again with your passionate and exquisite writing. I respect how each couplet both shows and tells us a story. Fantastic poem!

An espresso con panna to you.
Clay

🙂

Oooh, very clever!

Really like that ending, tight

Oh Hell his filling came out. It’s sad that he learned to lie so well. I am happy he did not teach anyone else to do it.

Ha, ha! Thanks for coming back to this, Fia. I am glad to have you read this. It is nothing special or important, but I think there are a few things that fall into those categories. This is certainly very different from any other of my works, and I am happy I got this story out.