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Jade72 wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Estranged

Poetry

April 14, 2025

9

Estranged..You entertained chaos within my ribcageYou left fingerprints along my spineImprinted this everlasting melody within my soul. Only to leave me wondering, if this storm ever meant to you, what it meant to me.Your etherial essence portrayed as being the...

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7 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Jade. Some dark undertones on this one, a fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Jade72
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thank you Damian, You are right. This was inspired by darker moments in my life.
- Crimsin
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  hello beautiful Jade this is some fine poetry allowing me to feel your depths 💕
  - Jade72
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you kindly Brenda. Sometimes I really get into deep emotions…and I pen it out.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Dark, sad, revealing. Wonderfully executed Jade.
- Jade72
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I assure you we are not the only ones. I have not healed completely but this heart of mine is pretty resilient. Thank you for reading.
- Jade72
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thank you Visions, your comments are much appreciated.
DampKitten wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

The Kraken

Poetry, Romance

April 14, 2025

10

You have releasedthe Kraken.The mighty eye opens,thrusting to the swelling surface.I come for you in waves,fists strapped to the starboard bow.Your tentacles are drapedlike twisted sea dreadsswaying across your varnished shoulders.I am the captain’s daughter.You are the mutiny of...

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7 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  You come up with fantastic imagery
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks, girl! I like the ocean. I was a pirate in another life.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  You nailed it.
  - DampKitten
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    I’m glad you think so, Thomas. Thank you!
- DampKitten
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Yeah, well… one of my fantasy creations… if you’d like to saddle up! Thank you for reading, Adagio!
- DampKitten
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  LOL. Is that a motherly mmm hmmm or someone with a naughty mind?
- DampKitten
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I’m glad you didn’t drown, baby. I have plans to smother you.
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Fia's Frankenstein Experience

Poetry

April 14, 2025

11

This is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...

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11 Comments
- Nick DC
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
- Nick DC
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
- Crimsin
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you, Brenda
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Tremendous work.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian
- M.E
  4 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I don’t know how I missed this one.
  Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)
  - Fia Naturie
    4 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, M.E
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Mr. Woody

Short Stories

April 14, 2025

7

Distraught over the belief that his wife was having an affair, Poppa Woody of Canada cut off his own penis & testicles with a kitchen knife in 2016. Unfortunately for him, he lived. Mrs. Woody denied ever having an...

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5 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  No. She picks them out herself. He does watch. He sits in a corner and envy’s all the men that fuck her. But she don’t care. Mr. Woody can’t even get off without being in excruciating pain. Mr. Woody is more like Mr. Softy. No not the ice cream truck!
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Filled with dark humor and gritty horror. You write this style with imagination and a flair for the dark arts of poetry.
  
  John
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    This style comes out very naturally for me. I was always into satire, horror and black comedy as a kid. Thanks John.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  The fucking irony my friend. Cleverly penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks Damian. You rock!
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Galaxy 500

Poetry

April 14, 2025

6

Hey lady, are you going my way?Hop in, there's nothing more to sayWe'll find a spot underneath the moonSit back and we'll listen to some tunesYou'll experience the universe & starsPlastic Jesus on the dash of my carJupiter, Neptune...

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4 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Let’s go. I’ll take you for a ride.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  You let me know the time & place and we’ll travel anywhere you want to go.
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Visions, I dig this! Reminds me of a 1950s film noir movie. You wrote this with pizzazz. Dig how you made this scene come alive as I read.
  
  John
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Awesome! Yes. Totally 1950’s, early 1960’s vibe I was going for. Maybe some Eddie Cochran playing or Dick Dale. Had fun with this. Thanks John.
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