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Betty Hermelee wrote a new post

• 11 months ago

Frozen Tears

Poetry

September 21, 2025

4

Cool autumn breeze shrouds my shoulders crisp cerulean brings forth the last of muggy days while flowers set about to wilt Tree leaves burst a montage of color flutter like birds who cavort One can reap a slight rush when wind begs for attention and rips the leaves with...

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3 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  11 months ago
  
  This is beautiful. I like the description of the wind begging for attention.
  Welcome to Stars Rite.
- emmagreen
  11 months ago
  
  Autumn is my favourite season – is there there anything that explains that death is an un-permanent? Whatever the long sleep, there’ll be a memory, an emotion, a tear or two, a baby born and happines derived from that wee darling’s first cry. You write with enormous sensitivity to life and also your love of Life and its companions. Many, many thanks for sharing not on fine writing but its meaning.
- Kelly Scheppers
  10 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  As beautiful and inspiring as autumn is, to witness the leaves in their pendulum dance, has a tendency to get me a little emotional. We learn so much from the trees – in their letting go. Your poetic offering of such an eloquent season brings it all into view, Betty. Thank you for your inspiring words today!
RPM wrote a new post

• 11 months ago

Tormented

Erotica, Poetry, Romance

September 21, 2025

3

A sliver of light through the blinds. You slept with legs parted, a hand on your own hip.Your tights were merciless,cloth stretched so tightI could see the shape of you.Lips pressing forward, the seam between your thighs, a shadow...

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2 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  11 months ago
  
  The want and the holding back are tormenting. Nicely done
- RPM
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thank you SeaCat!
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 11 months ago

The Great Deceiver

Poetry

September 21, 2025

19

Fueled by a consuming rage Pointed at every situation As I fall into the final stage Right before the initiation Locked inside self-torment Wiggling out of the noose Keeping all the spirits dormant Until madness is busting loose Pressure building within me Anger clouding all that I see Face...

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19 Comments
- Atticus Abbey
  11 months ago
  
  Great!
  - Damian DeadLove
    11 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Fia Naturie
  11 months ago
  
  This is really good. Damian <3
  - Damian DeadLove
    11 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  11 months ago
  
  Oh yeah, this one definitely needs a place on the album! I hope it’s coming along well! The halls are a bit echo-ey without you wandering them as often, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    11 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s going, though it took a while to get my “Logic Pro” software. Which allows me to mix better and I can even master my music with it. But, I got a song mapped out structurally, I have lyrics for everything but the bridge. Which I just came up with that bridge tonight. Gotta record vocals, and backing vocals next. Hopefully, I’ll be letting you hear it soon. I miss you too, my friend. You’ve been penning some excellent work my friend. Thanks for your continued support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  11 months ago
  
  Powerful work. Superb.
  - Damian DeadLove
    11 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  11 months ago
  
  Great work. I get an image of a man struggling with who to trust.
  - Damian DeadLove
    11 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Pretty much. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- RomaJ
  10 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  I get the sense of internal conflict, and the rhythm and urgency make it clear these are lyrics meant to be performed.
  
  The energy builds perfectly toward the chorus: “Face to face with destiny…” I especially like the line “Loyal to the art of betrayal” – it’s a great, concise piece of wordplay.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Tim
  10 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  More great lyrics, Damian. Very heavy stuff. I hope to hear the music someday.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. When I get some songs finished, I’ll let you check them out. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  A kickin piece my friend. Your a gift to the world with your writing.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thanks for the continued support brother, means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Neville
  9 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Well poemed my friend .. 😎👍
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
    - Neville
      9 months, 2 weeks ago
      
      My pleasure entirely .. 👍
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 11 months ago

seduce

Poetry, Spirituality, Uncategorized

September 20, 2025

10

there is a code of flameeach spark and tendrillicking the airspreading the heata sacredness of smokeas it rises all the way to the heavensa magic in fireit can warm or burna destructive forcea beautiful transforming desireit licks at the...

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10 Comments
- RPM
  11 months ago
  
  Wonderfully written. I could feel the warmth of the fire!
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    thank you graciously ❤️
- Atticus Abbey
  11 months ago
  
  Fantastic!
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
- Fia Naturie
  11 months ago
  
  You always put the perfect image with your poems. Love this.
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    thank you beautiful ❤️
- Thomas W. Case
  11 months ago
  
  Powerful work. Superb.
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    thank you dearest Thomas ❤️
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
Betty Hermelee and Backdeckbenny (Peter) are now friends

• 11 months ago

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