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      The Adventures of Tex & Blae-Lok - 7

      © 2025The sky suddenly grew dark  --  and very loud! Blae’s feet dug into my shoulder, quite hard. “Ouch.” I said aloud, involuntarily.“Shut up, Tex!” Blae commanded. He didn’t just say it. It was most definitely a command.I shut my...

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      © 2025OlderBy FlatDaddyDays lumber into nibs    nights creak foreverGood times erase themselves with lost memories    bad ones multiply in puddlesPain shakes hands with madness    while elbows wobbleRain falls in my closet    where holes nap on...

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      • I recently wrote a piece about aging too. I visit my mother in her apartment building every weekend and I see others there, just hanging out in the lobby alone. She says they never get guests and that many of her neighbors are jealous of her consistent visitors. It made me sad to think about all the stories sitting in silence. I’ll post it in honor of this poem and its message

      • Well, we’ve gotten here, you and I, and now our elbows wobble. (and all that other stuff) But doesn’t it beat the alternative? Maybe a little Neil Young is called for:

        Old man lying by the side of the road
        With the lorries rolling by
        Blue moon sinking from the weight of the load
        And the buildings scrape the sky
        Cold wind ripping down the alley at dawn
        And the morning paper flies
        Dead man lying by the side of the road
        With the daylight in his eyes
        Don’t let it bring you down
        It’s only castles burning
        Find someone who’s turning
        And you will come around

        • I’m not sure if you got my response to your Neil Young tribute for me, Sam. Sometimes I forget that when replying to a comment, one should click the Reply button directly below the comment to which one is replying. Usually, I notice immediately, then I copy it, paste it using the correct Reply button, then delete my original. But I have the sneaky feeling that I’ve screwed it up other times and come off looking like a shit.

          But I left out of my below comment something I meant to say to you: “Old Man, look at my life, I’m a lot like you only a lot better looking.” Man, that guy sure knows how to write, huh, Sam?

      • Well, Neil Young isn’t my favorite (it”s the voice), but he’s a hell of a writer, so I’ll take this with a big thank you, my friend. And a big Ho, Ho, Ho, too!

      • This one walks like a wounded animal—slow, deliberate, and not asking for pity.
        That rain in the closet and reflection lying flat? That’s grief stripped of metaphor and still standing there, breathing.

        • Damn, Thomas, you nailed it! Uh huh. You always say the nicest things, my friend — and I sure do like the way you talk. Thank you!

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      Cosmic being

      A cosmic being.She had expectationsAnd would not settle for less;

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      The Beast Confession
      Confessions are made to come from the heart
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      Whether is it good or bad from the start
      I need you to sit and understand me a bit

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