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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreUnjust jealousyhas taken over meI cannot believethat you cannot seethat he is for me I will channel this rageas my pen flies across the pageThere is no smoke or sageThat will bless what is coming in spades You need to understandWhen...
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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hello beautiful Fia this is perfectly written and it’s true older women no more how to please a man I like an older man myself combined with a little arrogance great write ❤️
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🩷thank you crimsin
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Love the flow first. but also the attitude of claiming what’s yours. Tight
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Thank you Me 😉
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
This is honest, real and demanding. Well said Fia.
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Thank you, Vision;)
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That flow and to the point understanding hit straight on
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Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
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I love this one, Fia.
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Thank you Atticus
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This is raw possession and feral confidence on the page—jealousy sharpened into language instead of apology.
It’s confrontational without flinching, and the voice knows exactly how far to lean into menace before it becomes theater.-
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Thank you, Thomas
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I’m digging the attitude and confidence. Telling it like it is in your own sense of style.
Back off my man! This is fun to read and had a swag urban feel to it.
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Haha Thank you. I guess I was really feeling this piece
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That’s tellen her. When Fia lays down the law, watch out! lol Nice one. 🙂
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Well, thank you, Tim.
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“There’s something that comes with age and time” there is something about this line that speaks with stoicism and control which also lets a little leeway to catch a case.
I loved the underlying theme, she may try tempt him but you have his heart.
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Thank you, Wally;))
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This is a subtle warning huh. LOL.
You make it seem “nice” because it rhymes. But so does “sharp” and “harp” -which is what they will be playing when you finish them off. LOL.
Great little ditty, with some real smoke!-
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Thank you, Styxian;)) Not so subtle I guess
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This is dark and reminds me of something that could be a thriller movie
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good morning beautiful Fia thank you graciously it is just some of the spirits I encounter from time to time ❤️
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Excellent dark write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate you ❤️
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Harriet-Jacqui xx wrote a new post
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Read MoreI can tell that he is desperate, aching for something more than just a woman. Not just any woman. He’s searching for something primal that goes beyond attraction or companionship. He wants a woman like me, a creature driven...
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Passionately penned, HJ. Excellent storytelling my friend, you have a way with words.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Bless you, Damian xx
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It’s crazy what runs through your mind while reading this, at first it was black widow/vampire, stalker/serial killer, and by the end we was thinking of a movie “Species.” This is a reader magnet, what is she and what will happen? Tight
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You’ll just have to buy BEINGS to find out! I give away so much of my published writing here and on my website, and I seldom get time to write which I must do : BEINGS 2 or The Poignancy of Living. I greatly appreciate your reviews but have to warn everyone that I’m so busy with marketing and writing these days – my raisons d’etre – that I don’t have time to review you all!
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreA collective sigh as time stands still Empty vessels born without a spine Fascist jackals committed to overkill Spinning the act of murder as divine How the fuck did we wind up here? Willfully ignorant to the endless lies Blurring the lines while living in...
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I don’t know when we let it start but it is not going away any time soon no matter how many get hurt.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. As far as I’ve been able to piece together it’s been building for decades, subtle things at first, now not so much. All that’s left is hope and that is what they’re trying to kill. So I guess it’s up to people to keep hope alive. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Much needed words Damian 🙏🏻
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Drieks. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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And here I thought this was going to be a Metalicca tribute…
I dunno dude, America is pretty messed up and confused by a lot of things. I don’t even try to understand most of the craziness coming from all sides. The aggression and violence, and antagonism’s and instigating is so rampant. I don’t see any solutions either, in any of it all.
Thankfully we can chill within our creative worlds and that helps us deal with it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sorry for throwing you off into thinking it was going to be a Metallica tribute. lol. I guess all we can do is what writers do, write our observations down and share them, and try our upmost best to keep some form of hope alive. I don’t know that anyone person has the answer to the world’s problems, so I just keep moving forward brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian. Your social commentary is spot on here. Your message is clear and your voice is loud & intelligent.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad the message is clear, brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for voicing something that’s been on my mind for quite sometime now. I had a title in mind but your piece has influenced me. Wonderful work sir. Let’s be the voice for the voiceless.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Glad I could influence you brother, yes a voice for the voiceless. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sigh…where to begin? I’m really late in arriving to this piece and it’s going to take me a while to catch up again. This is such a solid expression of the insanity taking place these days. And as more has occurred since the writing of this, it doesn’t appear to be ending. What we can take and hold as hope is that my fellow Minnesotans said fuck the tyranny and stepped up. Not in violence, but in peaceful protest and consistently showing up. The intent of the regime was to instill enough fear and chaos immediately to cower everyone quietly into their assigned boxes. That didn’t happen. They chose a winter people in their hibernation season. Wake the bear…deal with the repercussions. They’re Vikings, for fuck sake! We do outnumber the guns and the bullies. That’s something to hold on to, my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m just glad to see you back in my comments. lol. You’ve been missed around here my friend. I did write this one for your fellow Minnesotans. It isn’t smart to provoke Vikings in their hibernation season, I agree. It’s all a revenge tour for this cult and their wicked heartless leader. Unfortunately they’re far from done, up to us writers to keep the bonfire lit. Just doing my best to keep up. It is something to hold on to. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Nick DC wrote a new post
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Read Morei want to bang my head against the wall because life's a cartoon fires in the streets protest signs with all talk and no action bitch, weed and cocaine Charlie's Kirk wife is on her WWE tour his base is rushing to Grinder Trump just started...
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Great piece here Nick. This is some great social commentary of our current world.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Spitting facts on this one, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Speechless!
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian