That is a selfish thought/ relatable. I know people who said they would want to leave before their spouse. Especially when they have been with them a long time.

Tremendous.

I really like this. Sometimes I think about this sort of thing and some people just don’t get it. They think it’s weird or morbid. 😅

hello dearest Benny I want to die first because I know my husband will be fine with me and not so much me if he died first we all have our reasons I don’t think it selfish 💕

This is sweet, and I agree with Crimsin, not truly selfish. Ideally, Lovers should be able to die at exactly the same time.

Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
It is not about painting, I agree. nice work

Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.

Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3

This piece is worded so well. Great description and a wonderful imagination here. Nice work.

Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)

This is deeply, thought-provoking.

I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.

It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.

Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x

Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
“secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
“your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)

Just an amazing piece of work, girl.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Amazing piece Crimsin!
Razor sharp ink.

You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!

Naaj

Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.

Thank you my dearest Adira! I keep on trying my best evrytime.

hello dearest Par this is very deep and must have been hard for you to face great write 💕

Wow, PAR! This is really good. I have to say I’ve never seen anyone self-analyze so meticulously as you’ve accomplished here in this series of pieces. For me, the word ‘violent’ in your poem may be slightly overbearing and excessive under the circumstance of your more extensive description. Perhaps ‘forceful’ or ‘foreboding’ … though I do see the intent to create shock through contrast.

You’ve managed to describe something that I’ve never paused to ponder… the power of silent observation, allowing the ribbons to unravel themselves until the package lies fully open and exposed. There’s a self-loathing quality to your piece, but it’s far deeper than that. It emulates the respect and honor provided by a student to his teacher.

Exceptionally intellectual and yet warmly appreciative. Well done.

Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This is so profound with deep introspection my friend. Wow, you never fail to amaze me. Fucking magnificent write! Appreciate you.

Damian

Hello PAR. I took a few moments to sign back onto starsrite and read your poem. This is one magnificent journey. WOW! Your a true artist and a real, authentic person. Your gift of expression and writing never seems to fail. Well said and marvelously executed.