Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write really pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

hello beautiful Fia this is perfectly written and it’s true older women no more how to please a man I like an older man myself combined with a little arrogance great write ❤️

Love the flow first. but also the attitude of claiming what’s yours. Tight

Thank you, Vision;)

That flow and to the point understanding hit straight on

I love this one, Fia.

This is raw possession and feral confidence on the page—jealousy sharpened into language instead of apology.
It’s confrontational without flinching, and the voice knows exactly how far to lean into menace before it becomes theater.

I’m digging the attitude and confidence. Telling it like it is in your own sense of style.
Back off my man! This is fun to read and had a swag urban feel to it.
Loved it !

“There’s something that comes with age and time” there is something about this line that speaks with stoicism and control which also lets a little leeway to catch a case.
I loved the underlying theme, she may try tempt him but you have his heart.
Great work

Well, thank you, Tim.

This is a subtle warning huh. LOL.
You make it seem “nice” because it rhymes. But so does “sharp” and “harp” -which is what they will be playing when you finish them off. LOL.
Great little ditty, with some real smoke!

This is dark and reminds me of something that could be a thriller movie

Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Excellent dark write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello beautiful Honoria so great to see you…you know I didn’t see the prayer within until you pointed it out just beautiful thank you graciously ❤️