Oh, this is great! That last stanza is like an echoing question mark

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This is awesome. Nicely said and executed marvelously.

Wonderful wordplay Drieks…

Awesome audio…

That is such a cool site feature…

– Cipher

Masterfully penned, Drieks. Great flow and fantastic wordplay my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Don’t count the minutes…..count the breaths.
Nice late night musing.

Damn, I can completely feel how it all seems like it can just slip right through your fingers…Time waits for no one and can be brutal with its incessantness, indeed

You created a universal understanding within your ink that most people can wholly identify with, especially once you’ve reached a certain age…

Wonderfully crafted – ty for sharing

🌹B

Your poetry always makes the reader think. This one is no exception. Nice work Damian.

Sigh…it takes us where it takes us. Regardless where you were going it took me to this…honor the memories, live in the moment. Ain’t nobody perfect. We’ve all got our demons. And they live where we can’t outrun them. There’s a lot in this one that speaks to different thoughts for me. Gonna be pondering this one for a while, my friend

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re spot on from another angle I was looking at as well. You’re so very welcome, and thank you. Appreciate you.

Damian

Has a bit of eeriness and regret like “The Raven”. Wonderful ink.

” Still repairing mistakes already made

Can’t hide past demons in the shade ”

Man, that hit home!!!
this whole vibe is a mood provoker.

Great writing.

Naaj

Thank you, Dragon-Fire

Powerfully penned, Fia. These are great lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Oh Fia, I sang this in the best Chris Brown voice I could muster.
I do like your version!! Beautifully penned as always. xx
~P.G💋

Great lyrics here. Nice work Fia.

Thank you, appreciate that.